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Reviews For A Place for Warriors
Your personification of both Harry and Snape leads me to believe you either have a history in psychology, or, unfortunately one of violence. I pray it's the former. Though as a reader with experience in the latter, these personifications have allowed a better insight into my own behaviors.
I can see what Harry means, about some things hurting more then others, emotionally. And the significance of Snape stopping was a big deal to him. Once again, Harry and Snape have reached another level of understanding each other. Hopefully things will be cooler between them now, but I'm not holding my breath since things are ALWAYS going awry for Harry -_-; That kid needs a break sometimes, I swear! The closing thought was both eerie and oddly funny, actually... Anyways, until next chapter :)
not going to lie i absolutely loveeed it!! great job!!
I'm curious to know if Harry is right about Dumbledore being in the Room of Requirement. I kind of think he is. Harry's instincts are usually good, and I can just imagine Dumbledore sitting up there waiting for Harry to come to him. I loved that Harry is concerned for him anyway, in spite of the pain he has caused and Harry's justifiable anger at him. I also loved how Snape went to check for Harry without even pausing. And the whole part where Snape almost lost control and beat Harry...but didn't, and the aftermath was brilliant. Snape should be shaken and ashamed, and I'm so glad that he was. But Harry is right: the fact that he didn't, that he stopped himself, is even more important. Snape can grow, change, and become someone better, and he's already taken the first steps whether he realises it or not. I'm so eager for the next chapter! Hope real life is co-operative, lol! Thank you for writing.
I can"t believe that Snape was going to use the belt on him. I"m glad that he changed his mind. You are such a great writer and I can't wait for the next update to see where their relationship is going. Snape should become his guardian, he'd be much better than the Durselys, even if HE doesn"t believe it. |
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