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Title: Chapter 24 09 Jul 2009 2:16 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that was just perfect.

    I'm so pleased that you haven't abandoned this story. I really love it.

    I love how Snape is slowly trying to gain Harry's trust. Aw, i'm going to cry

    So where is Harry going to go now, with Snape? Oh, I don't even know how old Harry is in this. I forget. Sorry.

    But I hope that you're going to update again soon!!
Title: Chapter 24 09 Jul 2009 1:58 am
Reviewer: trifecta (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I was so surprised to see this story had been updated and so excited to read the latest chapter. I certainly wasn't disappointed!

    Loved the chapter all the way through. I especially loved Snape's nickname for Harry. I hope he uses it again sometime. You've done a great job keeping everyone IC and not rushing the Snape/Harry relationship. Wonderful job!
Title: Chapter 24 09 Jul 2009 1:34 am
Reviewer: Mavet (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, thank Merlin!

    I was SO worried you'd abandoned this story, which I must say is easily my FAVORITE portrayal of both Harry and Snape in a fanfic. Not only are the events they go through intriguing and dynamic, but they are so loaded with character development that I think you've ruined me for most other works of fanfiction.

    Your characterization is very well done; you've taken Snape and Harry from chapter one, where they literally fall off of Rowling's pages in terms of canonic realism, all the way to twenty-something or so odd chapters later where Snape has become the single adult at Hogwarts whom Harry trusts most implicitly - and it's done with such subtlety that I BELIEVE every word of it! BRAVO!

    I very much love that even though your Snape is bonding with, and beginning to understand more of Harry, he's still believable as CANON Snape - something that I find many other incarnations of the character lack.

    Anywho... All else I can say is that you've done a marvelous job, and I expect many more updates, much more frequently! (If you make me wait another half a year for a new chapter, I may deteriorate into absolute madness!)

    With Thanks,

    Mavet
Title: Chapter 24 09 Jul 2009 1:06 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Very, very good chapter. If, as one reviewer commented, the dialogue occasionally seems "disjointed", I think that is actually following the feelings and thoughts of the characters. Their feelings, Harry and Snape that is, *are* disjointed. Neither is sure what they should feel or what they should say or how they should act and your writing reflects that very well.

    Great to see this update!
Title: Chapter 24 09 Jul 2009 12:24 am
Reviewer: Nyx the Panther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    YAY!!!!! You updated!!!!!!!!!!! :)
    This chapter was very good, and i'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. Please please please update again soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Thanks for updating!
    Nyx :)
Title: Chapter 24 09 Jul 2009 12:22 am
Reviewer: riasnape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Been following this for so long now - love it please dont stop now it is starting to really interest me again.
Title: Chapter 24 08 Jul 2009 10:45 pm
Reviewer: R2M (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Worth the wait!! Loved the chapter!!
Title: Chapter 24 08 Jul 2009 9:52 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    First let me say that I love this story and I'm very glad you updated. Your writing has a lyrical, almost poetic quality that I really enjoy.

    Given this, I hate to be critical, But I must admit that I found this chapter to be a little disjointed, and the dialogue a little forced. Severus and Harry seem to be totally in character though, and I really appreciate that.
Title: Chapter 24 08 Jul 2009 9:20 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a beautiful chapter! I love how supportive Ron and Hermione are and how they are so protective and devoted to Harry. Their surnames may not be Potter, but they are Harry's family.

    They made some interesting points about Harry's relationship with Snape and I was actually glad to see Harry hesitating and giving it some thought. I want Snape and Harry to become close and to heal one another, but Snape does seem rather unstable right and I don't want Harry to be a door mat for him either. Snape's conduct the other night was inexcusable. I know he feels horrible about it, but he does have to learn to let go of some of his anger. Harry's not the only one who needs Healing.

    I'm curious about what's up with Dumbledore. If he's really hiding out in the Room, if something has happened to him. Because if he is healthy and all, then it seems irresponsible of him to abdicate his duties, both to the school and to Snape and Harry, and hide out.

    I'm worried about Harry ignoring Umbridge's summons, too. I hope he'll be able to get away with saying he didn't hear her, but she is so vindictive and petty.

    I was so happy to see a new update and I'm so eager for the next chapter.

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