Wonderful story, I look forward to reading more,
skittles to you
I really liked this chapter. Snape finally opened up to Harry, although reluctantly, and now Harry has a much better understanding of Snape. It might help them actually get along!
| Title: Chapter 8
| 16 Aug 2007 2:32 am
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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Interesting twist at the end of the chapter! PLease update soon!!
Very good chapter. I've been thinking recently that Hermione would never have done what Lily did. Then, more recently, it dawned on me that Harry wouldn't have done what Lily did either. Oh, they'd have probably had a lot to say about the friend's behavior, but when the apology came, they'd have accepted it. Lily didn't, even though she implied to James in the Worst Memory scene that she wanted Snape's apology to come on his own accord. But then when he brought his apology, and was willing to stay all night at the Gryffindor door (imagine if the Marauders had come along - he was inviting attack), she still wouldn't forgive him.
Lovely chapter. I, too, was disturbed in DH that Lily threw away a 7 year friendship with Severus and stopped trying to help him. I'll be interested to see how the rest of this plays out. I think that the canon name of Harry's second son shows that he did some major thinking along these lines.
That's the first time I saw a story in which Harry blames his mother. Snape was great when he did! I loved the conversation and Harry's mind's making parallels between their lives. And I do believe he'd have done anything for Ron and Hermione, just as he said. Too bad his Mum didn't for Snape. Wonderful chapter!
Brilliant chapter!...especially the Occlumency scene and the last several lines. I'm hooked on this story. Please update again soon :)
One more thing: was the shift in tense (from past to present) done on purpose? Just wondering since all the other chapters are written in past tense...
I already love this story. Although Snape is such a bastard for not taking the Veritaserum. I'm still not sure how I feel about the plot and how believable it is. I think I don't know enough still to make that decision, but for what you have, it is definately good!
| Title: Chapter 7
| 09 Aug 2007 1:51 am
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| Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous)
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Awww.... love the chapter!
I loved the scene in the end with Lily!
Well, update soon, please!
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