The last part of this chapter was heartbreaking. Harry's emotions are so raw. You have conveyed this beautifully. And Snape's sneakiness was so in-character.
aww...a touching sort of moment
| Title: Chapter 7
| 04 Aug 2007 2:49 pm
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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Awesome chap. PLease update as soon as you can!!!
I thought the mirror was broken in SS but I can't say for sure. Very good chapter!
Ah! Great chapter. Very dramatic. Wow, great job!
"Snape, too, looked more relaxed after giving a class and setting an essay.
Or maybe it was just the alcohol."
LOL!
oh... poor harry. wonderfully emotional chapter.
wow... you had my poor heart hurting for the boys. hope they both realize that no matter their differences they're feeling the same emotions and missing the same person... wonderful job, and I'm looking forward to reading more!
I actually reread this entire story yesterday, and was wishing for an update soon. I am SO glad you did! lol. This is one of the only stories I've read that keeps Snape and Harry in character so well. The plot is brilliant, and I love what you've done with the brief messages sent by Dumbledore. This story is amazing. I suppose a rereading of this chapter will have to do for now, but just know I am DYING for an update. lol :)
| Title: Chapter 7
| 03 Aug 2007 9:54 am
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| Reviewer: Jen77 (Anonymous)
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WOW! Great job! I hope you won't be gone long.I think Snape needs to talk about Lily and hug the boy.
Great Chapter your story is getting better and better. Can't wait for more.
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