Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 5 23 Jul 2007 4:28 am
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    lovely chapter. cute sleeping bags.
Title: Chapter 5 19 Jul 2007 6:46 pm
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chap! Please update soon!!!!
Title: Chapter 5 19 Jul 2007 6:15 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! GREAT chapter! Wow Snape really is daring and mean to touch Harry's scar like that. Poor kid.

    Best description I've read this monthh: "...his black eyes barely separate from the darkness."

    One typo worth mentioning: "It was covered in blisters, as thought recovering from a particularly nasty burn." though

    I fixed the formatting for you. :) Thanks so much for the update! It makes waiting easier.

    Author's Response: Ooh thanks for pointing out the typo!  I fixed it.  Uh oh, what was wrong with the formatting?  I didn't even notice!
Title: Chapter 5 19 Jul 2007 4:37 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    This story continues to have many intriguing elements. I wonder what is up with Harry's scar, and the ambiguity you have given Snape so far is different. I'm looking forward to what they find out about each other from the veritaserum. Although I can't believe Snape doesn't have an immunity to it.

    Author's Response:

    Oooh I hadn't considered that Snape might be immune to Veritaserum.  Hmmmmm....

Title: Chapter 5 19 Jul 2007 4:14 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Another interesting chapter. At this point, I'm starting to lose patience with Harry. He made such a huge deal out of touching his scar, as though Snape should have realized it would cause him pain, but even Harry said it hadn't happened before. And Harry calculates what to say to be more and more hurtful. Sure, Snape has been insulting to Harry as well. But in a way, Harry seems to be looking for the stuff that will hurt the most - at Snape's greatest vulnerabilities. Odd. If Harry *knows* that Dumbledore's trust and consideration is really important to Snape, wouldn't that be something positive? Yet Harry just uses it to try and hurt him.

    Author's Response: My feeling is that Harry and Snape are both starting to go slightly stir-crazy in the Room, and so are starting to act out.  I don't think Snape would have touched Harry's scar, or Harry been so vicious towards Snape, otherwise.  We'll see how Harry feels about Snape after Veritaserum, I guess.
Title: Chapter 5 19 Jul 2007 2:26 am
Reviewer: Carolyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh things are getting very interesting now...Thanks again for another awesome chapter!

    Author's Response: You are welcome!
Title: Chapter 5 19 Jul 2007 1:12 am
Reviewer: Dino1Draco (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story cant wait for more of it, and thanks for the threat for the Deathly Hallow I am personally avoiding the internet till amazon sends my copy.

    Author's Response: Stay away from the NY Times, too, they just printed a review.  Why can't people just wait until July 21?!
Title: Chapter 5 19 Jul 2007 12:20 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Pure brilliancy. This is one of my absolute favorite stories. Snape seems to be softening a tad, am I wrong? ;)

    Author's Response: Why thank you!  As for Snape...well, wait and see. 
Title: Chapter 5 18 Jul 2007 11:54 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    I promise Snape, I know nothing! But I loved the chapter. I just don't know what I'm supposed to do between now and the night of the release of the final book if you don't intend to update before then.

    Author's Response: I know, I can't wait until the release of the book!  Maybe I will start writing another chapter...
Title: Chapter 5 18 Jul 2007 11:50 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! I loooved how Harry hit Snape! THat was truely an awesome moment! Especially since Snape hit him earlier in the nose with the book. I can't wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response: Yeah, that punch was rather satisfying to write.  Thanks for the review!

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