Good chapter! I like the interesting twist with the Room breaking. I also looooved the entire OotP movies and the Snape/Harry scenes were rather amusing, especially with Snape's comments on Harry's memories. Anyways excellent chapter and I'm most certainly looking forward to reading more soon!
I wasn't sure at first if I was going to like this chapter, but by the end of it, I really did like it a lot. I'm curious to see where you go from here.
Can't wait fo you to contonue.... :)
Whoo! Fantastic job, what drama and what Snape is saying- wow. Very unique but so in character. What a job. it makes sense though, Harry brewing with those Muggles like a potions. Nice take on it.
Great job on this chapter. What does Snape deserve? I don't know, a good whallop? No, maybe a mum. :)
You know, this has the potential to be very bad, to wreck Snape emotionally, but somehow I think he's stronger than that. I wonder if the room will do anything at all. Or maybe it'll do something to Harry?
Oh, that was fantastic- loved it. The potions metaphor was exactly the type of thing I'd expect Snape to say after something like that. It just fits. And keepin' away from specifics about Snape's father was very good, in my opinion. I wouldn't expect tons of major confessions so soon (if ever), not from him.
What Snape deserves, I couldn't say for sure, but I don't think it would be too much to believe that he deserves a friend. Aren't I the soppy one? :)
Keep up the awesome writin'.
~Tilly
| Title: Chapter 3
| 06 Jul 2007 9:15 pm
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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NOOOOOOOOO! Bad cliffy!!!!!! Please update soon.
(Snape needs a lolipop!^-^)
Ooooo Excellent chapter!!
This story is excellent because Snape is so unpredictible. I automatically expected him to show Harry some sympathy, but he doesn't, which is so characteristic of Snape. I'm so used to reading fics where Snape softens almost immediately. It's more believable this way.
I can't wait to see what the room has in store for Snape. It's hard to tell whether or not he's trying to help Harry. Needless to say, I think he deserves *something*
Great chapter!!
| Title: Chapter 3
| 06 Jul 2007 8:39 am
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| Reviewer: lilseverus100 (Anonymous)
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I don't know what to expect but I am kind of worried about what the room might do to Snape...
Can't wait to see what happens!
Interesting chapter. I really liked the potions metaphor. How very Snape-ish! Doesn't surprise me at all that he understands his whole world through potions.
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