One of the most awesome chapters in Harry Potter fanfiction! I can't even begin to pick it apart. It's just perfect. Snape's tantrum, screaming at Harry that he wants to go back to his old beliefs was perfect. It was all perfect. I don't believe I've ever given a 10 before but I am now.
*wonders what will happen* Good chapter. It took a different turn than I thought it would. :)
Oh me, oh my, oh dear! Hehehee, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
The bit about the memory was really very unexpected, and I think it's a great direction to go in. Ohh, I want to see what Snape thinks of the whole... incident. Keep the greatness comin'!
~Tilly
Ohh, I really liked that- very nicly done!
The bits about the Dursleys were worked in, which is one of my favorite things to read. Great writing!
~Tilly
good chapter. I'd like to see how you have Snape react to Harry's memory
| Title: Chapter 2
| 02 Jul 2007 3:07 am
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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That was an interesting story! Hope you can update soon!!!!!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 01 Jul 2007 7:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Fabulous story - I certainly hope you plan on continuing it. I'm very interested to know what's going on ...
| Title: Chapter 2
| 01 Jul 2007 7:09 pm
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| Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous)
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A wierd way from Snape's view to describe Harry as "a runty little thing." But then again it is Snape we are talking about...
Well, I like the story, it is quite interesting. I wonder where Dumbledore is...
Update soon!!!
oh man! Snape's gonna see it all, eh?
Wow...great chapter! I love how Snape has begun to realize that he has to depend on Harry in this situation.
I can't wait for more!
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