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Reviews For The Bond of Trust
Title: Chapter 2: From Hell to Hogwarts 13 Jun 2015 6:55 pm
Reviewer: SHallow (Signed) [Report This]
    The storg has an odd sense of suspense, I want to really read more, but I cant help but think I dont want to as well. It needs some work in the descriptions but otherwise it is good
Title: Chapter 1: The Favor 06 Aug 2007 9:58 pm
Reviewer: Becky (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The 'Harry abuse' is a bit over the top and unrealistic. Also, I can't picture Snape being reduced to childish name-calling. Yes, he's sarcastic and insulting, but he's also intelligent and witty. He's capable of thinking of a better insult than 'pig.' It sounds like something a fourteen-year-old would think of.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, it is a bit over the top. And thanks. I'll look into changing those insults.

     

    Your criticism is appreciated.

     

    Ktoddhim

Title: Chapter 2: From Hell to Hogwarts 06 Aug 2007 12:05 am
Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor, Harry...

    Good Severus agreed to help.

    Can't wait for more! Great fic!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks

Title: Chapter 2: From Hell to Hogwarts 05 Aug 2007 12:08 pm
Reviewer: Geek6 (Signed) [Report This]
    Another lovely chapter.. I'm looking forward to the next.

    Because I'm a bit of a picky knickers when it comes to spelling *grin*.. it should be Bonfire, not Bond Fire.. sorry.

    Author's Response: Thanks. Your spelling corrections are welcomed. *smiles*rnrnKtoddhim
Title: Chapter 1: The Favor 05 Aug 2007 11:55 am
Reviewer: Geek6 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start to a promising story. I've enjoyed it so far.

    One thing though.. you've two words that are obvious spell check mistakes.. thrown instead of throne.. and incite instead of insight.

    Other than those.. it's looking good..thanks for sharing.

    Author's Response:

    Ooo thanks. I'll fix those.

     

    Ktoddhim

Title: Chapter 2: From Hell to Hogwarts 05 Aug 2007 6:09 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Poor Snape knew from early on that he'd be stuck with Harry before the Headmaster said anything.

    Author's Response: Thanks!rnrnYes he did. Poor Severus.
Title: Chapter 2: From Hell to Hogwarts 05 Aug 2007 2:08 am
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AWesome story so far!!! Please update soon!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks. I shall.rnrnktoddhim
Title: Chapter 2: From Hell to Hogwarts 04 Aug 2007 11:01 pm
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed) [Report This]
    Don't stop here - just go on writing.... I am looking forward to seeing first interactions between Harry and Snape :-)

    Author's Response: Thanks. *smiles*
Title: Chapter 1: The Favor 04 Aug 2007 12:05 pm
Reviewer: PotionsMaster90 (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked this alot! I'm wondering whats goingto happen next, but only you know that right? Update soon!
    -Potions

    Author's Response: Thanks! I shall update soon.rnrnKtoddhim
Title: Chapter 1: The Favor 18 Jul 2007 4:58 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Pretty good start so far. I suggest getting a beta reader to fix errors like 'wail' when it should have been 'whale'.

    Author's Response: Thanks lots!rn

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