you know the other story you used to have the same as this but with james still as harry's dad what hapened to it
what happened to your other story like this but with james as harry's dad please answer me on fanfiction.net
| Title: The Future
| 30 Sep 2008 5:43 am
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| Reviewer: aemilyl (Anonymous)
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WOW!!! This was an amazing story. I loved it so much, thanks for such a wonderful and terrific, and believable story!
teddylonglong-
I must say this story, and the first one, are great stories. I was sad to see that you had started to leave the site but am happy that you came back. Please keep reading and do not let others opinions get you down. If you would like I would be happy to read your stories for context or factual basis, I am a horrible speller and my gramar is poor so being a beta is not something I can do. Please keep writing.
Black Cat
Author's Response: Thanks for your encouragement! In fact, I accidentally deleted the first story when I was trying to change the chapters into the new, revised version. Then Jan put it up again for me, but I couldn't change the chapters. So I'm going to delete it again now and put it on again all over. Sorry for the trouble!
| Title: Prequel
| 02 Oct 2007 5:19 am
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| Reviewer: OneCool_Girl (Anonymous)
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I like the idea of the story, but I can't find the first story. I would really like to read the first story before I start this one, as it looks really good. Thanks for the great stories ^-^
Author's Response: sorry, I accidentally deleted it yesterday :-(. Jan promised to put it up again tonight - sorry for the inconvenience. You should read the first story first, otherwise the sequel won't make sense :-)
Bravo!!!!!!!111 Bravo and again and loudly! You are wonderul and I enjoyed th ride immensely Thank you.
oh my goodness, i'm very suprised that Ron could get so mad at Harry so quickly. Intrested to see what happened. Love your story, keep up the great work, and update soon. LES
Wow, I don't think I've ever seen Severus that angry with Harry. Curious to see what Harry is up to, keep up the good work, and update soon. LES
Hmm... the only thing I could find was a passage about Harry having his feathers crawled... somehow, to me that should be "stroked" or "have his head scratched"... but I'm probably too tired to think (exams make me insomniac, and I hate taking meds).
Harry and his parents are not communicating- I foresee a great explosion. At least I hope there'll be one before Harry goes off and does something stupid!
Author's Response: Istn't Harry already stupid enough??? No, there won't be an explosion ;-) Thanks for reading - and for your review :-)
I think the chapter was fine, didn't really pick up on any big mistakes so I wouldn't worry too much. I really liked this chapter, the memories are really cute. Hopefully nothing happens to Harry out there in the snow, I have a feeling that Lily is going to be pretty upset when she finds out that he was outside. Keep up the great work, update soon. LES
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