Hmm... the only thing I could find was a passage about Harry having his feathers crawled... somehow, to me that should be "stroked" or "have his head scratched"... but I'm probably too tired to think (exams make me insomniac, and I hate taking meds).
Harry and his parents are not communicating- I foresee a great explosion. At least I hope there'll be one before Harry goes off and does something stupid!
Author's Response: Istn't Harry already stupid enough??? No, there won't be an explosion ;-) Thanks for reading - and for your review :-)
I think the chapter was fine, didn't really pick up on any big mistakes so I wouldn't worry too much. I really liked this chapter, the memories are really cute. Hopefully nothing happens to Harry out there in the snow, I have a feeling that Lily is going to be pretty upset when she finds out that he was outside. Keep up the great work, update soon. LES
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