I love the parallels between our two favorite dark haired boys.
This is really interesting. I like how you're doing this. I can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: Why, thank you very much! That is a fantastic compliment...I'm glad that you are enjoying the read so far. :) More is coming!!
Interesting. Is there going to be more or was this a oneshot?
Author's Response: There's more!!! :) Thank you for the review!
Good, interesting start! I can tell this is a story I would enjoy reading. One thing I would suggest: if you are going to continue the "back and forth" theme between Harry and Snape, I would think about changing up the style a bit in future chapters, just so it doesn't become repetitive and predictable. Other than that, nice beginning :)
Author's Response: Actually the repetitive theme is a big part of how I wrote it...sorry! I was experimenting with new ways of writing and this is how the story turned out. :) I hope that you enjoy reading it anyway. Thank you for reviewing. :)
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