That was a fun experiment. Thanks for sharing.
Veryyy interesting. The Hogsmeade piece was especially interesting. I also like how you moved away from having them experience the same literal experience, and instead just situations of the same like, emotional significance or magnitude? Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you, very much. It was a new type of writing that I thought I might like. Glad you enjoyed reading it and thank you very much for the great review!! :D.
Very interesting story... Really well written, and nicely execueted... It really saw 'deep' into the heart of the matter... I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. ;). lol. Glad that you enjoyed reading it!
The conclusion gave me goosebumps. I like what you did with this story. It's original and interesting, and actually, I'm sad it's over...lol. Write more soon! Nice work :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! What a sparkling review. . .I was going for "original" on this one. Glad I got it right. ;) Don't worry, I have Plot Bunnies a plenty! lol.
Nice ending. This was a bit strange but it was different than other stories I've read.
Author's Response: That was the idea...make something different. :) I am glad that you liked it! Thank you for reviewing. :) You made a fangirl very happy! :D
So very sad. I wonder what they did next. Great idea for a story and terrific all the way through.
Author's Response: I have NO idea what they did next...but I liked how it turned out! :) Thank you for the compliments and the review. :)
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