Great opening chapter, though intensely sad.
Oh this is so good I can't beleive this cliff hanger. It must have been awful waiting for the next chapter, I'm so glad the story is already completed so that I don't have to wait. I can already see why this was a featured story; but poor Harry.
man that was disgusting! great first chapter though!
I love stories with younger Harry, and this is no exception - you've characterised him really well, and I am very impressed with the scene at the end where he's going through the trash - I think you've illustrated Harry so well in this first chapter. I'm definately in love XD
| Title: Chapter 1
| 14 Aug 2007 8:05 am
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| Reviewer: Kate_360 (Anonymous)
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It was nice and I am looking forward for further chapters. I guess, I'll do just that right now.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 01 Aug 2007 5:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Becky (Anonymous)
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Are you telling me that the neigbors never noticed Harry chined up in the back yard? You need to think-out your story a bit more.
So now that you're posting ere, I guess I'll review here. :)
I like that Harry is seven years old at the start of this fic. it's a little unusual, I think. Poor Harry.
I love it so far! You do a wonderful job of making Harry's predicament and emotions seem real. I can't wait to find out what happens...
Really good start! It really sets things up. Poor Harry. If he doesn't get rescued soon....
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