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Reviews For Whelp
The Dursleys are vile. I can’t wait for Snape to arrive and mete out some justice.
If you behave like a dog, you'll be treated as one. Should've know you were fit for living indoors with decent folk. The second sentence should read Should've known you weren't fit for living indorrs with decent folk. The way you have it now is a little confusing but its a great story! Write on!!!
To steal another author's phrasing, you are made of awesomesauce XD
Vernon is so nasty. I hope he gets what's coming to him. Author's Response: HI Jan! The issue over unclipping the leash will be dealt with a bit later, and yeah, I have plans for Dursley. Very special plans. Thanks for reviewing!
--Rachel
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