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Title: Chapter 2 10 Nov 2022 1:21 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
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    The Dursleys are vile. I can’t wait for Snape to arrive and mete out some justice.
Title: Chapter 2 27 Feb 2012 5:12 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    That's so awful. I can't wait until Snape comes in and saves the day.
Title: Chapter 2 14 Apr 2011 7:08 pm
Reviewer: garfield090684 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! This is quite powerful stuff the kind of thing in nightmares or written about in books but there are some VERY cruel people in this world and you have captured these characters well in your writing. The only thing I feel the need to point out is one typo.

    If you behave like a dog, you'll be treated as one. Should've know you were fit for living indoors with decent folk.

    The second sentence should read

    Should've known you weren't fit for living indorrs with decent folk.

    The way you have it now is a little confusing but its a great story! Write on!!!
Title: Chapter 2 26 Mar 2008 6:59 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    man...i feel bad for harry! another good chapter!
Title: Chapter 2 01 Sep 2007 6:55 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    Can I just say that I love how you've still made Harry defiant (well, sort of) and how he won't eat the dog food. It's really nice how you've sort of hinted that, even though he's put up with so much, he still knows he's worth more than a dog.

    To steal another author's phrasing, you are made of awesomesauce XD
Title: Chapter 2 23 Jul 2007 11:30 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. So he can unclip the leash. Why doesn't he? Does he not know where he really could go?

    Vernon is so nasty. I hope he gets what's coming to him.

    Author's Response:

    HI Jan!  The issue over unclipping the leash will be dealt with a bit later, and yeah, I have plans for Dursley.  Very special plans.  Thanks for reviewing!

     

    --Rachel

Title: Chapter 2 20 Jul 2007 8:22 pm
Reviewer: Kirby Lane (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry!
Title: Chapter 2 18 Jul 2007 11:22 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Eww I think I'd rather eat grass than dog food, although I hear Pedigree has some tasty canned food...

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