Safety at last. Thanks for the great chapter.
Wow. I like how you ruled out all of the other options and well just everything.
Yay - Snape is taking the world into his own hands. Or at least, Harry Potter's world XD
Fantastic - well, not what Harry has had done to him, but with no conflict there's no resolution, right? Plus we all know he'll survive and have Snape right there to comfort and protect him XD
Title: Chapter 4
| 14 Aug 2007 8:20 am
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Reviewer: Kate_360 (Anonymous)
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Oooh! I always do like an angry Snape. Well, let's see how Harry responds to Snape.
POor Harry. :*( Poor boy. I hope that he isn't too emotionally scared after this. I think Snape is going to beat himself up about not checking up on him for a long time to come.
Finally! It was really maddening, waiting for Snape to get there.
It's hard to see right now how Harry can recover from this.
Great explanation for why Snape decides to take him, instead of dropping him off where he could be someone else's problem.
Title: Chapter 4
| 19 Jul 2007 5:59 pm
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Reviewer: Sarah (Anonymous)
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This is very well written I did wince at a few parts doing that to Harry! I hope they get what's coming to them. Doing that to a child they never get punished in the book for all the neglect they did to Harry either gits.
Snape was right though taking Harry to St Mungo's would have created and outcry against muggles. Will Snape contact Dumbledore when he get's to Spinner's End? looking forward to more of this =)
Wow, I didn't at first think that the story would be good. I don't usually like extreme abuse stories. But yours holds promise. Your explanation of why Snape was going to the Dursley's was fresh and new, and his reason for taking Harry himself was, as well. It means that your story will undoubtedly hold much to look forward to. I'll happily do so.
Title: Chapter 4
| 18 Jul 2007 9:11 pm
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Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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Excellent beginning. Enjoyed how you written the characters and I look forward to reading more of this story.
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