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Title: Chapter 5 20 Jul 2007 8:53 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder how Snape is planning to prove that he had good reason for taking Harry from the Dursleys. If he heals everything, and Dumbledore decides to play dumb to save face, Dumbledore could try to send Harry back. That would probably be the end of Harry right there, even if he physically survives it.

    I can't wait for Snape's revenge.
Title: Chapter 5 20 Jul 2007 7:56 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww Snape is being so cautious and careful while healing poor little Harry's wounds. I really hope you can write a revenge type of scene where Snape curses the Dursley's or something like that. Seince Vernon treated Harry like a dog, then perhaps he could be cursed to bark rather than speak. That'd be interesting! Well I'll leave you to decided something interesting and I look forward to reading what happens next!
Title: Chapter 5 20 Jul 2007 7:35 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Harry! Poor, poor Harry. But i'm so glad that Snape found him and that he is being healed. I liked how much Snape seemed to care for him. The healing descriptions were done very well. I'm glad that Snape waited before working on his ankle.

    There was one paragraph that was in italics, that I don't think you meant to be in italics:

    "Harry was his name, not whelp or boy or freak. And someone was saying it. No one had since . . . since Miss Egglestrom..."

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the catch!  I only meant the first word to be italicized.  It's fixed now.


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