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Title: Chapter 7 10 Nov 2022 4:01 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, another story in which I must loathe Dumbledore for his many failures. I wonder what he has in store for Harry. (I read this story years ago, so I don’t remember the details any more!)
Title: Chapter 7 28 Feb 2012 12:08 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    You could be? What is that supposed to mean?! That was cruel to leave the chapter hanging like that. Does Dumbledore mean that as long as you believe it's true the spell works or that they can somehow find a loophole or is Snape really the dad? But he already counted the days and knows Harry is not his, perhaps Lilly could have magically lengthened the pregnancy or she had Harry late. Well I guess ill find out in a second.
Title: Chapter 7 05 Sep 2007 1:30 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "Severus whirled to face the man. "Yes! I could do a better job. Not that I will, mind you. I have no desire to become a father."

    Oh Snapey - you've just talked yourself into the corner, right there XD And Dumbledore! You are so Slytherin, you sneaky old codger you! (to steal the phrase XD)

    That's it Dumbledore - manipulate him XD It's for his own good, anyway C:
Title: Chapter 7 14 Aug 2007 8:46 am
Reviewer: Kate_360 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, boy! Snape sure was ticked off. Okay, so I was wondering whether Dumbledore was going to be umm...you know kind of bad guy? Well, I guess I'll know in the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 7 25 Jul 2007 8:10 pm
Reviewer: shiva (Anonymous) [Report This]
    please update soon
    I can't wait to see what will happen next
Title: Chapter 7 24 Jul 2007 1:59 am
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    awesome. i can't wait to read more.
Title: Chapter 7 23 Jul 2007 10:46 pm
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow. Awesome story!!! Hope you can update soon!!
Title: Chapter 7 23 Jul 2007 10:40 pm
Reviewer: HakuoBlaze (Signed) [Report This]
    poor harry!! go Snape! love the story!
Title: Chapter 7 23 Jul 2007 9:22 pm
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    Evil Dumbledore. I knew he would try something like that. I like Snape's indecisiveness, it seems very realistic.

    Excellent chapter... frustratingly short... I'll be eagerly waiting for more!
Title: Chapter 7 23 Jul 2007 2:42 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Lovely.

    I love Snape's rage in this. Very well done. Dumbledore seems in character. :)

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