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Title: Chapter 8 10 Nov 2022 4:04 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Great plan! Thanks for the nice chapter.
Title: Chapter 8 28 Feb 2012 12:20 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    This was great! I love Harry's conclusions anownow Snapes reactions are always just right. I hadn't considered a blood adoption, mostly because I've never heard of one before. Did you invent it or am I just not reading the right fanfictions?
Title: Chapter 8 30 Jun 2008 7:29 am
Reviewer: Mo (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "I'll car accident them!" had me rolling!!!
Title: Chapter 8 14 Jun 2008 12:27 am
Reviewer: anoynomouse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "I'll car accident them." lol.
Title: Chapter 8 05 Sep 2007 1:34 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "There was merest curiosity about him," Severus said. "Not covetousness."

    You LIAR XD. Anyways, Snape really does need to get used to the idea of having Harry around, doesn't he ... what with pulling Harry out from under the bed and needlessly terrifying him and all that. NOT GOOD INTERPERSONAL SKILLS, SNAPEY. No no no XD
Title: Chapter 8 14 Aug 2007 8:56 am
Reviewer: Kate_360 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, that's nice but Harry seemed a little too defensive but then again considering his life with the Dursleys, he would be. Good chapter, anyways.
Title: Chapter 8 26 Jul 2007 4:26 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwww, yay! yay! Love it. So cute. Poor Harry. I liked the description of the bandage on his foot. And it's so funny how he thought that he was supposed to be a House Elf. I loved how Snape told him that he was going to be hid son, like it was some sort of occupation. XD Cute.

    "...The ward must be based in truest love to continue the protections his mother lent him. But you loved Lily, didn't you, my dear boy?"" that is a GREAT idea! Nice call! The wards could work on LOVE! That's why Lily's family had to take Harry, because Petunia would have loved her, or hopefully so. And is Snape did too... nice going! You used blood here, but i think other people will be using wards based on love some time...

    "Either Ligilimancy or observant eyes could have told him the truth." It's Legilimency. :)

    "But if I can not do it . . ."

    "Then he will need to go back. I'm sorry, Severus."

    Wow. Playing on he guilt, huh Dumbledore? Great chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review!  I couldn't remember how to spell Legilimency, and both ways I tried it looked wrong, so thanks for that, too!  About the adoptiopn and love, I figured, there's such an emphasis on love as the power the Dark Lord knows not, that it would be the perfect basis for the blood wards.

     Thanks again!

Title: Chapter 8 26 Jul 2007 11:10 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape is going to have to learn some patience, quick.

    I wonder if all of this is going to cramp his teaching style.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!  Since this will be Snape's first go at teaching, this fall, he won't have too much of a style to cramp yet.  But yeah, patience isn't really his strong suit when it comes to interpersonal skills.  Potions, sure, but people . . .  :)
Title: Chapter 8 26 Jul 2007 8:09 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww little Harry gets a father!

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