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Title: Chapter 9 10 Nov 2022 4:20 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus has such a long way to go with Harry.
Title: Chapter 9 28 Feb 2012 12:34 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwww for some reason that ending seemed so sad. And it was kind of creepy when Snape said that Harry would be his. But I still love Harry jumping to conclusions and Snape being perfect-you know: knowing how to react and what to say, not being to cuddly or mean etc. Thank you for writing this, it's such a pleasure to read
Title: Chapter 9 04 May 2008 7:07 pm
Reviewer: Woodi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent story:)
Title: Chapter 9 05 Sep 2007 1:38 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "A sport of high aggression and high danger, played, for the most part, by arrogant fools with no sense of self-preservation." He paused, and continued less bitingly, "Some people seem to enjoy that sort of thing."

    Major LOL! factor there XD I like how he's all like, Yeah! Let's mould this little kid in my image! but goddammit if there isn't this little picture of Lily in my head, wagging her finger at me.

    On Harry's flinch-reflex: I like how this doesn't just suddenly go away - these things take time, you know, and with Snape it might take just a little bit longer than usual XD
Title: Chapter 9 14 Aug 2007 9:03 am
Reviewer: Kate_360 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, poor Harry! So insecure but that's gotta change, isn't it? Anyways, I like the chapter very much.
Title: Chapter 9 26 Jul 2007 11:28 pm
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chap. please update soon!!!
Title: Chapter 9 26 Jul 2007 4:42 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww... poor Harry. you managed to do the awkwardness very well. Once thing I'm wondering is, when if Harry going to get a bath? I know there were cleaning spells used on his, but Snape said he could still smell him, and it's been over a day since.I'd think Harry would want to wash after that ordeal.

    Great chapter, and I love how Harry is calling Snape father. I can't wait to read more of this fic! It's fantastic.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!  As for baths, Harry will likely get a proper one before he gets dressed, but Snape did wash him by hand after he did some healing, so it wasn't just the Scourgify.
Title: Chapter 9 26 Jul 2007 11:11 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    I was thrilled to see this updated tonight, by the way. And *two* chapters!

    Sad ending to this chapter. Poor little Harry.

    On the other hand, things seem to be going pretty well for him. Let's hope the adoption goes through with no problems.

    Author's Response:

    Well, now, where's the fun of "no problems"?  :-)

     I should have anew chapter today or tomorrow.  Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 9 26 Jul 2007 8:15 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Two chapters today! Both were excellent!

    Author's Response:

    And another!  Thanks for reading and reviewing . ..


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