Really sweet and touching chapter end!
That was a great chapter ending. And middle and beginning. What do the Dursleys think happened? Or did they just not care that Harry's gone.
| Title: Chapter 10
| 13 Oct 2007 4:36 am
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Anonymous)
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Oh, I am so very glad I read this story. It's wonderfully written, especially the last few chapters with Harry at Severus' house and the adoption ritual! Oh, the language of it was just so very touching!
I really look forward to seeing where you take this from here... and how this twist of the tale from canon will affect the events when Harry comes of an age to attend Hogwarts in four more years.
The only reason I'm rating this a 7 is to have 8, 9, and 10 available for the terrific chapters yet to come.Well done!
"Just like," Albus said quietly. His robes were the green of summer meadow, with bright yellow flowers embroidered on the sleeves."
I love the sound of his robes XD It reminds me of this picture I saw on the internet, just after HBP was released, of an old hippy riding a bicycle through London. It had the caption "Dumbledore LIVES!" and the old man had this really awesome rainbow tye-dyed tee-shirt. Yeah. Awesome XD
I heart Snape/Harry love. And this story is full of Snape/Harry love. Therefore I LOVE THIS STORY XD
| Title: Chapter 10
| 14 Aug 2007 9:48 am
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| Reviewer: Kate_360 (Anonymous)
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Well it was a different adoption process than any I have read any of the other stories and it is really nice. I liked the chapter very much.
Great job so far i think this is really original and I love how your not rushing things!
~Spiorad
Awwww! YAY! Lovely chapter. And yes, I noticed that Harry had a bath- well a shower. Tehe. :) lovely chapter. Thank you for sharing it!
Wonderful new chapter happy to see you can log back in here to update.
Author's Response: Yeah, *cough* I'm a bit of an idiot. Shhhhh, don't tell!
| Title: Chapter 10
| 27 Jul 2007 11:27 am
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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Awesome chap. So he#ll be Harry Snape now wont he? Hope you can update soon!!!
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