I really like the way that Harry’s new life is shaping up, with his new name, dapper robes, and full belly.
"Of course he had no ulterior motives in removing the surname of his nemesis . . . Oh, who was he kidding?"
Yes, who are you kidding, Snapey? Certainly not anyone who's reading this story XD
CAN YOU FEEL THE LOVE TONIGHT? THE PEACE THE EVENING BRINGS? XD
I really like the way you brought the Prophesy in. I felt sorry for Snape.
I'm counting down to Wednesday, so I hope you're going to pull through with your promise! ;) I've seen this story updated a couple of times recently but never had the chance to look at it until tonight. I'm particularly partial to feral child-like stories, in that odd way I'm sure you can understand, and so it was a pleasant surprise to find out how well this one is written. I'm quite impressed with your ability to use words and emotions as you do. You certainly know what you're doing :)
I look forward to the update! You seem to have put up quite a few chapters in such a short amount of time, and that has me excited :D Great job!
Keira
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Keira! I have a lot of time to write at work, so I can get one chapter done a day, just about. I alternate between this story and "Walk the Shadows," which I just updated today. I appreciate your kind words, and hope the story continues to appeal. I'm certainly having fun writing it. Thanks again!
Another excellent chapter. Alright, I've decided I won't hex the Dursleys. What they need is a good old fashioned a** whupping. Sorry, getting my Southern on there. hehe
Beautifully written, as always.
Great chapter but I hate the cliffy ending! Why is he screaming?? I suppose I'll have to wait until Wednesday then. :)
Ack! Poor Harry! This was such a sweet chapter, and I was expecting a gentle ending, but it threw me! Ack! I wonder what's wrong, is it a nightmare? lovely emotions here. Harry is just precious.
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