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Reviews For Whelp
PATERNAL!-Snape is always my favourite XD My love for Snape is intensified in light of the punishment he dishes out for the Dursleys. Still no love for them, though XD
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on a chapter for "Shadows" right now, but I should get to Whelp tomorrow, most likely.
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I like that you had Snape and Harry clear up the miscommunication between the words Freak and Magic when you did. Poor little Harry shouldn't have to live through that confusion anymore than he had to, lol. I loved the ending of that scene too. Little kids are so precious. I like the spell Severus used on the Dursley's as well, though I hope the repercussions are too harsh for five year old Dudley. Though he was a bullying git, he's still a small child who is moreso learning from his parents still than not. In any case, I think it's a smart idea to have their deeds come back to them. Good thinking :) Can't wait for the next chapter :D Keira Author's Response: Hi Kiera! Thanks for your review, every time I see one, I get all happy. :-) There'll be loads more miscommunications between Snape and the li'l nipper, don't fret, but this one had to get cleared up, although there will also be a lot more ocnversaations about how magic isn't bad, and neither are the people who use it. Mostly. As for Dudders, he's actually 7 (same age as Harry) but I get your point. He won't get anything back but what he's dished out. I'll have Sev explain more about the spell in an upcoming chapter, which should be . . . tomorrow? I hope? Thanks again, --rachel
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you *did* enjoy the next chapter. ;-)
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