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Title: Chapter 12 10 Nov 2022 4:34 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    A taste of their own medicine is the best vengeance, indeed.
Title: Chapter 12 13 Nov 2012 11:33 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    "Priori Malum Res, Redeo" That is so fun to say it just rolls off the tongue
Title: Chapter 12 05 Sep 2007 1:53 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "A visit to those Dursleys was in order, for this and their many other transgressions. Immediately, if he could manage it."

    PATERNAL!-Snape is always my favourite XD My love for Snape is intensified in light of the punishment he dishes out for the Dursleys. Still no love for them, though XD
Title: Chapter 12 24 Aug 2007 6:52 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    Heh, the Dursleys seem to be punished pretty well. :-D
Title: Chapter 12 02 Aug 2007 7:48 pm
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AWESOME CHAPTER!!! Hope you can update soon!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm working on a chapter for "Shadows" right now, but I should get to Whelp tomorrow, most likely.
Title: Chapter 12 02 Aug 2007 2:52 am
Reviewer: Kristi Parrish (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellect. I am really liking the story.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 12 01 Aug 2007 5:53 pm
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Because I was ultimately bored, I went to look at the reviews you received for this last chapter, and I saw that my review somehow never made it :( I wrote out a nice sized review and all, lol. Oh well, I'll be more than happy to write you another one.

    I like that you had Snape and Harry clear up the miscommunication between the words Freak and Magic when you did. Poor little Harry shouldn't have to live through that confusion anymore than he had to, lol. I loved the ending of that scene too. Little kids are so precious.

    I like the spell Severus used on the Dursley's as well, though I hope the repercussions are too harsh for five year old Dudley. Though he was a bullying git, he's still a small child who is moreso learning from his parents still than not. In any case, I think it's a smart idea to have their deeds come back to them. Good thinking :)

    Can't wait for the next chapter :D

    Keira

    Author's Response:

    Hi Kiera!  Thanks for your review, every time I see one, I get all happy.  :-)  There'll be loads more miscommunications between Snape and the li'l nipper, don't fret, but this one had to get cleared up, although there will also be a lot more ocnversaations about how magic isn't bad, and neither are the people who use it.  Mostly.  As for Dudders, he's actually 7 (same age as Harry) but I get your point.  He won't get anything back but what he's dished out.  I'll have Sev explain more about the spell in an upcoming chapter, which should be . . . tomorrow?  I hope?

     Thanks again,

    --rachel

Title: Chapter 12 01 Aug 2007 11:56 am
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    woo hoo! go Severus!!!
Title: Chapter 12 01 Aug 2007 8:10 am
Reviewer: Vicki (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, wonderful! I loved how Snape comforted Harry, and it's interesting that Harry could already put up a silencing charm so young without even knowing how to do it. I *loved* Snape's revenge on the Dursleys--a particularly fitting one. And it was very innovative to have him learn about Harry's treatment from the ones who so abused him. Thanks so much, and I look forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I hope you *did* enjoy the next chapter.  ;-)
Title: Chapter 12 01 Aug 2007 5:11 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! I am sooo glad he extracted revenge on them! And the punishment is perfect too. :)

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