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Title: Chapter 13 10 Nov 2022 4:50 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    What is the old codger hiding? Harry is certainly having an understandably tough adjustment.
Title: Chapter 13 28 Feb 2012 1:57 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooh that was good. Thank you for being such a good writer and posting too.
Title: Chapter 13 05 Sep 2007 2:17 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, you are hiding something, Dumbledore XD

    "Maybe he wasn't really a wizard. Maybe his new father wouldn't want him, if he couldn't do the magic on purpose. If he couldn't, he'd have to make sure his father never found out then."

    Harry: you are so gorgeous and cute and I would swoop down on you and give you lots of fat hugs and kisses and squeezes if I didn't know you'd flinch away. And possibly also for fear of my life, because Snape is starting to become veeeery protective of the Snape family's newest, littlest member XD
Title: Chapter 13 24 Aug 2007 7:35 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    *sigh* Evil scheming liar!Dumbledore is at it again! I'd be angry too, if I was Snape.
Title: Chapter 13 14 Aug 2007 10:34 am
Reviewer: Kate_360 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved the story so far. I really hope that with time Harry opens up more to Severus. Anyways, good chapter.
Title: Chapter 13 03 Aug 2007 11:08 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Must have more!!!!1 teehee totally lovin this story cant wait to read your next update

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review!  I should have a new chapter out sometime this weekend.

Title: Chapter 13 02 Aug 2007 10:33 pm
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmmm. Perhaps the blood ritual didn't work because Harry's really not James' son. Lol. I'm enjoying your twist on the classic idea of it all. Assuming I'm right... and if I'm not, I'm still enjoying it :)

    Poor Harry. Poor poor Harry. His thoughts, and his past experiences, make me feel so bad for him. It's heartbreaking. And at the same time, I feel just as bad for Snape, for what he's going to have to accomplish - all in all - to heal Harry, especially with his own past to over come.

    Doing great :D Hope to see more soon!

    Keira

    Author's Response: I can not be forced to reveal the truth of the Blood Ritual, no matter how many cookies you offer me!  ;-)  And yeah, Snape and Harry really are just two messed up individuals.  I guess that's why throwing them into cage matches and watching the fall out is so much fun.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 13 02 Aug 2007 9:37 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. I loved this becuase it is so true with Dumbledore:

    "I always tell you everything you need to know."

    "And not a tenth of what I want to know,"

    He never outright tells anyone anything! Anyways excellent chapter and hopefully more soon!

    Author's Response: Yeah, Dumbles has always sort of infuriated me, with his half-truths and outright omissions.  I guess I see Snape being even less tolerant than me.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 13 02 Aug 2007 9:30 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Six years under that curse! Boy are they in for some fun times. Sounds good to me. Good chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  By rights, they should be under it for far, far longer, and maybe go to Azkaban, too, but there's a limit with how much stage time I want to give them, as I find them completely despicable.  Thanks for the review!

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