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Title: Chapter 14 10 Nov 2022 5:24 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    So fun to be at Hogwarts!
Title: Chapter 14 11 Mar 2021 8:10 am
Reviewer: Colder_Than_Midnight (Signed) [Report This]
    AWESOME LOVE IT
Title: Chapter 14 28 Feb 2012 2:11 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwww I love how cute they were at Hogwarts but it seemed really sad when Harry said that he had to hida his not being a wizard from Snape
Title: Chapter 14 05 Sep 2007 2:23 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "I'm easily distracted," Harry said, sounding like he was quoting something. "And after morning break, I'm often moody and unpredictable."

    I really love how you hint at things through dialogue and through small actions, and like things through Harry's reluctance to have a bath. I've read some fanfictions where the authors are so sure that we can't add the dots together on our own, and so make sure to point out every little detail, either when it's happening or right at the end, so I can't tell you how happy I am that you're just letting us build up our own little picture at the end. You haven't even told us all of the Dursley's memories, which (aside from the fact that there'd be like 10 pages worth of memories for each of them) is nice. I always like to imagine some things myself, in stories XD
Title: Chapter 14 14 Aug 2007 10:49 am
Reviewer: Kate_360 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It was one of my favorite chapters. Harry was so happy, and I love this chapter for it. Anyways, good chapter all round.
Title: Chapter 14 06 Aug 2007 7:42 am
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    oh cute!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 14 05 Aug 2007 6:06 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    love the chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 14 05 Aug 2007 6:04 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    love the chapter.
Title: Chapter 14 05 Aug 2007 12:06 pm
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hugs and kisses for being so good about updating!! I cant wait to read your nextchapter XD

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Monday or Tuesday, I think, for the next chapter.  I'm posting another one for "Shadows" today.
Title: Chapter 14 04 Aug 2007 9:15 pm
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Harry's so cute!! I thought it might take him longer to call Severus Daddy, but worked nicely :) I like how he was still more than happy to tag-a-long with Dappin and do chores, even though he certainly didn't have to. I imagine that with only ever being allowed to do chores, he'd have a favorite or two - which even isn't totally abnormal as a lot of people feel that same way.

    And Hogwarts. Back so soon - but I'm sure the fun's only about to begin :D I hope to see more soon - it totally made my weekend to come check my email and see the update so soon (I know, I keep saying that, but it really does just make me so happy, lol) so thank you for that.

    Keira

    Author's Response:

    Hi Kiera,

    Yes, Harry;s got some favorite chores (and some he _hates_) but I was trying to sum up a bunch of stuff that might not have been very riveting reading.  :-)  Hogwarts is definitely a good place for fun (aka trouble) to happen.  I should have a new chapter out by Monday, Tuesday at the latest.  Thanks again for your reviews!


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