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Title: Chapter 17 10 Nov 2022 5:33 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m glad that Harry has a friend. Thanks for the enjoyable chapter.
Title: Chapter 17 28 Feb 2012 2:45 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooh I love your version of Draco.
Title: Chapter 17 07 Mar 2010 5:45 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Reading your note made me realize that I've only commented once on this story and I wanted to remedy that as such. I am greatly enjoying this story. I love the punishments being doled out, very fitting, and your Harry is very believable. I also like your Draco and I hope to consider so in the future. Maybe nice Harry will rub off on Draco. Oh, but I hope that doesn't get Draco beat...
Title: Chapter 17 05 Sep 2007 2:41 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    I have two favourite lines:

    "Draco face was reddening, and it contrasted quite a lot with his pale, slicked-back hair. "I don't know! But it's bad, whatever it is, and they are it."

    LOL! Sometimes you are such a noob, Draco. Cute, but a noob.

    "Severus wondered briefly how far off the grounds he could get if he were to wipe that expression off Malfoy's face permanently."

    Probably not very far - I daresay you'd be stopped by the white peacocks, who Lucius has probably trained to live off meat XD
Title: Chapter 17 14 Aug 2007 12:33 pm
Reviewer: Kate_360 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter and now I guess I know that Draco and Harry are going to be friends.
Title: Chapter 17 09 Aug 2007 9:12 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm anxious to see how Draco acts at Snape's home as opposed to his own. Damn that Lucius! As I read the scene where the older Malfoy confronts the younger about being late, I got this instinctive, fierce feeling in my stomach like "Touch him and die..." Draco has always been one of my favorite characters, and I'm a little protective of him, it seems. lol

    Anyway, wonderful chapter! It's nice to see Harry starting to have fun and laugh :)

    Author's Response: HI Jade,  Yeah, even in canon, there's hints that Lucius may not be much of a strnager to dealing out physical punishment.  And I figured Draco could use a friend as much as Harry could.  There'll be plenty of opportunity for the two of them to get into mischief at Hogwarts.  Should be fun.  ;-)  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 17 09 Aug 2007 5:29 pm
Reviewer: biblios (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the way harry isnt fully recovered, and is very incaracter though I would like to see him being meek infront of draco, this has the potential to allow harry to become more self assured and draco more humble, may be a flash back while draco is here would be good allowing him to see harry is broken and sev asking him to not tell his dad in such a way as draco does...? or may be dosent?
    lol ruey

    Author's Response: Hmm, interesting idea.  I'll have to consider that.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 17 09 Aug 2007 11:48 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I guess the visit with the Malfoy's went a bit better than I thought it would. It seems like Draco is still young enough to not be a completely lost cause. And I'm glad to see that Harry isn't going to let Draco just walk all over him.

    It will be interesting to see how the two of them balance each other out. Harry is way to old for his years, and Draco is too coddled to truly know the ways of the world. I'm sure, though, that they both understand what it is like to have a domineering role model. Lucius can be just as cruel as Vernon Dursley, I'm sure.

    Thanks for the update....

    Author's Response: You've hit the nail on the head.  draco might even come off the more changed (from canon, at least) by the experience of having Harry as a friend.  I figure, he probably doesn't have much in the way of peer interaction, so having Harry aruond will be good for him, too.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 17 09 Aug 2007 5:21 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    That's nice that Harry and Draco were able to get along. Without Lucius around, Draco is more nice and not nearly as worried about acting improperly in front of his father. I'm sure if Draco conmes to Hogwarts, they just might get into all kinds of mischeif. :)

    Author's Response: Oh, yes.  Mischief galore!  ;-)
Title: Chapter 17 09 Aug 2007 3:45 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    I was shocked when I came on and saw two chapters I hadn't read. I thought you'd just updated both of them today, but apparently I missed your last update. Oh well, two in one shot was nice :D

    I love stories in which Harry and Draco are friends. It's pretty hard to picture it when it happens after they've already had their school boy issues (though it can be done quite well sometimes), but when they start off as little kids and don't know they're "supposed" to be prejudice against each other... it's just really fun. I'm glad Harry has a real friend now. That would be something good to bring up in the next chapter or so, I would think - that he actually has a friend. You know how little kids can be when they meet a new friend. It's all they ever talk about, lol.

    Good job. I really liked the flow of the chapter, and the snideness that is Lucius Malfoy, lol.

    Keira

    Author's Response: Oh, yes, Draco has the opportunity to be much more well rounded as a character (instead of Prince WhinyBrat) and the two *will* balance each other out nicely.  Thanks for the review!  I should have a new chapter out tomorrow or Saturday.

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