Oh no, Harry’s suffering was all for naught. Severus could have raised him. I’m surprised he didn’t rage more at Albus.
Why didn't nelli get Snape right away? Whoa I guessed right-about Lilly charming her pregnancy but I don't like that they cheated on James.
wow. i love the way you introduced hagrid and the fact that you put in a father/son relationship....love it all
"His face was pasty and white, and trembles wracked his frail body. Blood had soaked the bandage on his left hand. Severus gathered the boy in his arms and ran back down the hill."
Seriously, what is there not to love about Snape/Harry love? If reading that doesn't send shivers up your spine, I don't know what will.
| Title: Chapter 19
| 24 Aug 2007 10:49 pm
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| Reviewer: rachel (Anonymous)
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Oh my!cool!
Harry is getting realy bashed up though.
| Title: Chapter 19
| 14 Aug 2007 12:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Kate_360 (Anonymous)
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It was nice but I thought that he had gotten over his anxiety about his being a house-elf. Guess not. *humph* Anyways, liked the chapter.
Aww, I really like this story. You've done a good job portraying a severely abused child, in my opinion. I've enjoyed reading this, and I look forward to the update!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Next update (as 20 is already out) will be Wednesday, probably. Assuming the muse cooperates.
| Title: Chapter 19
| 14 Aug 2007 3:14 am
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| Reviewer: Annette (Anonymous)
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Hmm. He took that better than I would've expected, really. No smacking Dumbledore stupid or Unforgivable Curses or yelling or anything.
'course, it's maybe just the shock.
So, whenya gonna update, huh? :)
Author's Response: I'm gonna go with shock for 500, alex . . . And I just updated, sheesh! ;-P
Ooh, you do pick the cruelest places to stop a chapter! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, and how poor Snape struggles to be a father :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Akblake! I know cliffies are mean, but I'm so used to reading them, and then writing them in my own work, that I'm sorta in the habit, you know? There'll be more fluffy bunny stuff coming up for father and son, no worries. --rachel
| Title: Chapter 19
| 13 Aug 2007 9:11 am
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| Reviewer: LaToya_Snape (Anonymous)
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great job like always keep up the good good work
Author's Response: Thanks!
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