I’m sure two seven year olds will get up to many antics running around Hogwarts!
This is a really fantastic story! I can't stop reading it, and that's a great sign.
"D'you want to meet a giant?" Who wouldn't want to meet one as nice a Hagrid?
This chapter was very nice and cathartic XD
"Daddy?" Harry whispered back, his deep green eyes hardly open a crack. "Please don't go. Don't leave me."
Plus the fact that he FINALLY breaks down and starts crying. I love love LOVE how Harry cries very late in the story. It would be really weird if he suddenly started crying like two days after he got rescued from the Dursleys, because these things just don't happen like that. But you've given him a chance to settle in and start to feel as though he is safe, which is so nice XD It made me feel all nice and gooey XD
| Title: Chapter 20
| 25 Aug 2007 12:07 am
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| Reviewer: rachel (Anonymous)
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You've now encouraged me to write my own fan fic!
Author's Response: Yay! Let me know when you've put it up. :-)
We are slave drivers, aren't we? But, you have to admit you love us. Anyway, great chapter. Poor Harry is just so convinced that someone is going to pull the rug right out from under him. And I have a feeling that his misunderstanding of what Snape said is going to be a bit of a problem sometime soon.
I've been away at camp for the last week, so I'm a bit behind on my reading. I was excited, though, to have several chapters of two of my favorite stories to read. So, now I'm on to the next chapter.
| Title: Chapter 20
| 15 Aug 2007 5:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Viki (Anonymous)
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this is a fab story i have just sat here and read the whole thing so far and i cant wait for more!!!!
| Title: Chapter 20
| 15 Aug 2007 12:19 am
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| Reviewer: snivella (Anonymous)
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your story is great,severus is great,YOU are GREAT!poor harry,I imagine what happened in the bath tub.Foul,foul Vernon!UPDATE quickly,pleese
Very, very sweet. I think Draco is accurate, although I'm curious to see how Harry and Draco will affect each other. With Severus watching every move, I tend to think Harry's personality will triumph, but if he's not watching closely, Draco might be more confident. Anyways, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks! I figure Harry and Draco will be good for each other. Their friendship will have twists and turns galore!
| Title: Chapter 20
| 14 Aug 2007 12:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Kate_360 (Anonymous)
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Nice chapter, I liked it very much. Umm...I guess now I'll have to wait until tomorrow.*sighs* So, yeah, I guess, I'll wait.
Author's Response: Thanks for all your reviews! I appreciate your kind words. I should have a new chapter out today or tomorrow.
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