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Reviews For Whelp
When Severus tugs Harry's lip out from between his teeth, it gets me every time! Such a beautifully realized little detail that shows how much he cares. And Fang's drool trailing away in a line...ick! I could see the drool so perfectly, it made my stomach churn. At least Harry doesn't seem to mind. Oh, and I love the teaser lines at the end of chapters that make me want to read the next chapter right away. Thank you for posting this!
I like how this is a very long process, the rehabilitation that Harry is going through XD On another note: Draco - cute? Yes. Spoilt? Definately! Something terrible is going to happen to Harry, I can just see it, and then Draco will be sorry. Then again, it will open up his eyes and (hopefully) improve his character, so it will eventually end up as a good thing. I have every faith in you to make sure everything ends up alright XD
I liked the part where Severus tells Harry to stand up straight and to not let Lucius know that he is scared of him. Lucius is just a big, evil bully, isn't he? I'm wondering if Harry will find out how Lucius treats his own son. Anyway, thanks for the update.
Anyway, I'm glad I was able to read the newest chapter. When I couldn't get on this morning, I thought...Great...now I'll actually have to work or something. lol. Until Friday... :)
Poor little Harry. Gonna actually get in trouble is he? If that won't scare the daylights out of him. Even better. Lol. Snape would be a scary father to upset. I'll be waiting patiently until Friday. I'm hanging on your every word here. You've successfully become like the most reviewed author right now. lol. Good job! Keira |
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