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Title: Chapter 21 10 Nov 2022 8:28 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I sense double trouble ahead!!
Title: Chapter 21 07 Mar 2010 6:54 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Of course you count the house elf, she'll get in trouble too, I 'spect. Poor Nelli
Title: Chapter 21 04 Jan 2008 11:16 pm
Reviewer: Malora (Signed) [Report This]
    You know, I'm not one for child fics, but somehow, you sold me on this one! Your fic is one of the reasons I won't say "I'll never read…" whatever, because when it's written well, I completely forget I'm not partial to child fics!

    When Severus tugs Harry's lip out from between his teeth, it gets me every time! Such a beautifully realized little detail that shows how much he cares. And Fang's drool trailing away in a line...ick! I could see the drool so perfectly, it made my stomach churn. At least Harry doesn't seem to mind.

    Oh, and I love the teaser lines at the end of chapters that make me want to read the next chapter right away.

    Thank you for posting this!
Title: Chapter 21 05 Sep 2007 3:11 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "Harry," Father murmured, and Harry chanced a look at him, to see sadness and hurt in his eyes."

    I like how this is a very long process, the rehabilitation that Harry is going through XD

    On another note: Draco - cute? Yes. Spoilt? Definately! Something terrible is going to happen to Harry, I can just see it, and then Draco will be sorry. Then again, it will open up his eyes and (hopefully) improve his character, so it will eventually end up as a good thing.

    I have every faith in you to make sure everything ends up alright XD
Title: Chapter 21 18 Aug 2007 1:32 pm
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh-oh! Well, I guess we will finally see how Severus deals with Harry when he actually misbehaves. I hope he count to ten (or maybe a hundred) before dealing with him.

    I liked the part where Severus tells Harry to stand up straight and to not let Lucius know that he is scared of him. Lucius is just a big, evil bully, isn't he? I'm wondering if Harry will find out how Lucius treats his own son.

    Anyway, thanks for the update.
Title: Chapter 21 16 Aug 2007 7:52 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I reviewed this chapter over at ff.net, but I usually read the stories at this site instead and thought I'd give one here as well now that it's back up and running...lol. I'm anxious to see what's going to happen to them; although, I'm sure it will probably be Draco doing something stupid and Harry attempting to rescue him--getting himself into trouble as well.

    Anyway, I'm glad I was able to read the newest chapter. When I couldn't get on this morning, I thought...Great...now I'll actually have to work or something. lol.

    Until Friday... :)
Title: Chapter 21 16 Aug 2007 3:34 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    A-W-E-S-O-M-E!

    Poor little Harry. Gonna actually get in trouble is he? If that won't scare the daylights out of him. Even better. Lol. Snape would be a scary father to upset.

    I'll be waiting patiently until Friday. I'm hanging on your every word here. You've successfully become like the most reviewed author right now. lol. Good job!

    Keira

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