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Reviews For Whelp
great chapter!
And I always thought the giant squid was a kind monster. I didn't realise he was just being that way so he could snatch up students to eat XD But SNAPE! You are an idiot. You are supposed to take Draco under your wing and save him from his father's EVUL ways, not shout at him and tell him to piss off. I thought we had a little chat about your interpersonal skills ... ? Well, whatever, your conscience has been dug out enough that there's no doubt in my mind you'll be feeling its full affects very shortly XD
I still feel sorry for Draco, though...you could tell he was very sorry, but I have a feeling he won't be able to escape punishment for this one. I just hope Lucius doesn't find out. But then even if he does, maybe that will give Severus a reason to stop Lucius from whatever he does to Draco....*stops* I guess I'll just have to wait until Monday. lol. I really loved this chapter. Great job!! Author's Response: Hi Jade, Thanks, as always for your kind review! And yes, I should have a new chapter out today, with apologies from pretty much every character possible. ;-) Oh! And thanks for nominating Whelp for Featured Story here. V. cool!
Author's Response: Thanks! I should have a new chapter out by Monday. Cheers,
Poor Draco! He is a bit of a bully, but he is just a kid. Snape was a little harsh with him. Makes me even more worried for Harry. Being a mom, and having kids that have done some pretty dumb things, I can understand how Snape will probably react. First, you're just so relieved that they're okay that you just want to hold them forever. Then, once you know they're okay, you start to think about what could have happened and about how stupid they were, and you just want to kill them (not literally, of course). So I'm guessing that Harry is really in for it. Don't keep us waiting too long to find out what happens. Thanks for the update. Author's Response: Next chapter, all will come out in the wash, for Draco and Harry, and Sev, too, I swear . . . but I gotta write one for Shadows first, so I'm afraid a little barbarism is in store. ;-)
I really really like the way you discribed Draco, spoiled prat through and thourgh but pure in the heart and innocent in his own way. Draco and Harry were too naughty in this chapter. They both deserved a good spank. But it won't do Harry any good considering his particular condition. And as long as I desired to see Draco being spanked, I'm sure Lucius won't allow his son to be hurt by others. I hope Snape won't let it go too easily though. They need some punishment. Or who knows what Draco will turn Harry into during his visit? A naughty little monster with angelic face and innocent heart just like himself? Awful! Sometimes I do believe Ron will be a much proper friend for Harry. Draco's just too sly and too energetic. I'm worried about Snape's sanity if Harry continue to follow Draco around. Snape won't survive the summer! Author's Response: Once Sev gets over the "OMG, they're okay!" stage, he'll get more into the "What the H*** am I gonna do with these miscreants?" stage, and we'll see some punishment handed down. . . . And Ron'll be making an appearance in a couple of chapters, along with others of the Weasley clan. Thanks for the review! |
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