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Reviews For Whelp
Hopefully Draco will learn in time XD Also - Molly?! Molly is like my favouritest character and is made of awesomesauce XD Plus it's good to know that Ron and Draco will have a chance to get to know each other, what with Harry being the metaphorical glue C: PLUS MORE SNAPE/HARRY-NESS! What more is there to say?? XD
Best regards, Jonathan
An interesting lesson for Severus to teach Harry. But it makes sense, given the circumstances and the Slytheriness of it all. I liked it. I'm also glad that Harry wasn't really punished, though it did make a thought come to mind. I wonder if at some point Harry might begin to use this ... lack of punishment to his advantage. It would be something a kid would want to test out, especially when he gets to the point where he's comfortable enough to do so. Or it wouldn't even necessarily be a conscious thing, but he could begin to assume he's able to get away with things. Anyway, I like the idea of Charlie being there too, lol. Poor guy. He babysits at home AND at Hogwarts. Lol. Looking forward to more :) Keira Author's Response: That is weird about the chapters, didn't notice it myself. But now I've deleted one. Yeah, Harry will be testing his limits, absolutely. He likes knowing what the rules are, but there's lots more ways he can get into trouble than there are rules. ;-) Charlie's 14 (15 in December) at the time of this story, so he's probably well used to the baby-sitting schtick. Poor thing. More will be forthcoming . . . er, tomorrow. Thanks for the review!
Ms.Weasly is ok!
Okay, now, Draco is clearly in need of a good wallop. Well, maybe not THAT...but I'm currently shaking my head at the little menace. I loved, however, the scene where Harry lied to keep Draco out of trouble. He's so sweet...I adore him in this story. OH!...And how clever to include Charlie! For some reason I was expecting one of the twins when Molly spoke of another son. I can't wait to read the next chapter and see how Harry, Draco, and Ron interact. A seven-year-old Ron...how adorable. Great job, as always :)
Draco seemed jealous of Ron already. I wonder how the two could get along. Looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon please. |
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