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Title: Chapter 26 10 Nov 2022 9:33 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter read like a perfectly warm cup of hot chocolate.
Title: Chapter 26 07 Jan 2011 4:02 pm
Reviewer: moccanica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    brill!
Title: Chapter 26 07 Mar 2010 8:08 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm such a goof, I tried to breathe in and out as I was reading it without realizing it and when I realized I was, I found I was backwards with my own reading! Talk about feeling silly!
Title: Chapter 26 15 Nov 2007 12:51 pm
Reviewer: snapes lover (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi im loving this story but just to let you no, tomatoes are poisonous to dogs lol
Title: Chapter 26 05 Sep 2007 3:39 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "She turned to Dumbledore and lifted her eyebrows as if to ask what she was to do with a recalcitrant child in her care."

    LOLOLOL XD That's right Molly, put him in his place XD Plus Charlie is so awesome in this chapter. And I'm glad to see Harry is trying his hand at Occulmency XD At least this time it's like 10 million times less painful than what we've come to expect XD
Title: Chapter 26 29 Aug 2007 9:35 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely loved this last scene with Harry and Snape. "Sploden Snap" was so cute, I laughed outloud and wished, again, that I could just take little Harry home. I love it when Harry is able to laugh at the things Snape says.

    Oh, and thank goodness Harry's nightmares are getting better! I think I found myself breathing innnn and ouuuut with Harry when Snape was trying to calm him...lol.

    OH! Another scene I liked was when Harry, Draco, and Ron were eating at Hagrid's and Harry was on his stomach, hovering over his food...I thought that was a great description!
Title: Chapter 26 29 Aug 2007 3:24 pm
Reviewer: Nicole (Signed) [Report This]
    I had a warm feeling every time Snape corrected Harry's use of words.
Title: Chapter 26 29 Aug 2007 8:30 am
Reviewer: morgana1616 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I love this story. I think the relationship between Harry and Snape is wonderful and I love the friendship that is growning between Harry and Draco. You are creating an amazing story. I can't wait tos ee what happens next!
Title: Chapter 26 29 Aug 2007 7:06 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a cool idea! Great show of creativity.
Title: Chapter 26 29 Aug 2007 6:28 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    So Snape CAN teach Occlumency. :-D

    Great chapter. More Charlie sometime, please.

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