Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For Whelp
Title: Chapter 27 18 Mar 2024 6:53 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    It’s been many years since I first read this. I’d forgotten how wonderful it is. It’s going straight to my favourites, and I shall definitely be reading it again - sooner rather than later.
Title: Chapter 27 10 Nov 2022 9:45 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks so much for the wonderful story! It had such intensity and range from despair and darkness to love and fluff-filled moments. Simply wonderful.
Title: Chapter 27 11 Mar 2021 8:59 am
Reviewer: Colder_Than_Midnight (Signed) [Report This]
    NO I NEED MORE PLEASE! it kinda feels incomplete. Idk ok?
Title: Chapter 27 25 Sep 2015 8:47 pm
Reviewer: dropspun (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A heartwarming story in which Snape and a 7 year-old Harry both get the nurturing they both desperately needed. Gives me a warm glow inside without being overly sweet, being the story of two people who are both slowly learning what it is like to give and receive love, with all the mistakes such an unaccustomed activity leads to. Lots of mistakes - like real people do instead of a facile "and they all lived happily ever after. The problems little Harry faces due to his past abuse are not glossed over, but are recognized -- with all the mistakes a new father would be expected to make -- while Snape's own chequered upbringing helps him to understand his new son. Really, the premise of Snape really being Harry's blood father (instead of his adopted one) even feels a little redundant; there is obviously enough love in him for the boy that him it wouldn't matter. Since it always felt to me that Snape got the short end of the emotional stick in the Harry Potter stories (it always felt like being bullied by James was the least of his problems; I always suspected a very bad home life) it made me feel good to see him in a situation where he got the love I always felt was severely lacking in his home life.
Title: Chapter 27 15 Mar 2015 5:40 am
Reviewer: Doublesims (Signed) [Report This]
    I got to the end and went to press next. It wasn't there. All I was think was 'I want to read more!'
    -Doublesims
Title: Chapter 27 07 Mar 2014 4:51 pm
Reviewer: Dontgotaclue88 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! :)
Title: Chapter 27 07 Mar 2014 4:51 pm
Reviewer: Dontgotaclue88 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! :)
Title: Chapter 27 29 Nov 2013 5:22 am
Reviewer: Zang (Signed) [Report This]
    I favorited Whelp 1 and 2! It's so heart wrenching seeing (reading) a seven years old being abused that bad. I'm glad that in the end Harry was happy with his father.
Title: Chapter 27 16 Jan 2013 2:37 am
Reviewer: WhispersInTheDark (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's...over?? NOOOOO!! BUT IT IS SOOOOO GOOD!! Is there a sequel? please? I loved it so much! It was so sweet and wonderful and I couldn't believe that it ended!!!
Title: Chapter 27 30 Oct 2012 1:36 am
Reviewer: Bribles (Signed) [Report This]
    I cannot wait to read the sequel to this story. This was very well written and I loved it!

Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5