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Title: Chapter 27 16 Nov 2007 7:14 am
Reviewer: Tabitha (Anonymous) [Report This]
    After reading Better Be Slytherin!, of course I had to check out your profile and found this marvelous work. I loved it. I love watching Snape care for a young Harry and I love little Ron and Draco too.
Title: Chapter 27 24 Sep 2007 6:59 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You sure like to put poor Harry through a lot of shit but I like how Sev handles it. That parenting isn't easy and dealing with an abuse child takes a special touch and what is normal for one is traumatic for another. Always wondered why with the miracles of the wizarding world they don't have growth hormones for poor short Harry!
Title: Chapter 27 10 Sep 2007 11:55 am
Reviewer: Morgaine Malfoy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AAAAAw that is so cute, can't wait for your new story. ^^
Title: Chapter 27 08 Sep 2007 1:32 am
Reviewer: Elizabeth Starchild (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked how you stayed true to the personalities of the characters. Thanks for an excellent read!
Title: Chapter 27 07 Sep 2007 6:57 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Positively perfect.
Title: Chapter 27 06 Sep 2007 7:36 pm
Reviewer: FoxxNyara (Signed) [Report This]
    I give you 9 chocolate truffles for excellent writing, 10 bonbons for a very engaging story, and 10 chocolate fudge sundaes for making me cry. I truly enjoyed your story, and I'm eagerly waiting for the sequel.
Title: Chapter 27 05 Sep 2007 3:46 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "Seemingly aware of the admiration he'd inspired, Charlie doled out praise and approval whenever possible, and Severus spoke to him about it over hot cocoa one evening after the two younger boys had gone to bed."

    I wish I had a brother like Charlie ... :C

    I'm so happy about reading this story, and then again so sad that it's over. But then I'm happy again that you are going to write a sequel, so I guess in the end it all works out.

    I think next I have to start reviewing "Better Be Slytherin!" because I love that story too XD

    Author's Response: Thank you, Sweartoad, for your wicked kind reviews.  I got a good chuckle out of your enthusiastic praises and turns of phrase.  I'm already working on the sequel, but still don't have a title . . . Ah, well.  Soon.  Thanks again!  -- rachel
Title: Chapter 27 04 Sep 2007 11:10 pm
Reviewer: JessieG (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG I really loved this story!! I can't wait till you create a seqel :D

    You portray Snape perfectally and I really love little Harry (poor little guy!)

    Your grammer and spelling are really good too (nothing more anoying then really bad grammer!)

    Now I'm gonna go and read your other storie.
Title: Chapter 27 04 Sep 2007 4:27 am
Reviewer: Jonathan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, that was a great ending to a great story. If you are willing to write a sequel to this story after you finish your other stories, I'm sure I would enjoy reading it! :-)

    Best regards,
    Jonathan
Title: Chapter 27 04 Sep 2007 3:23 am
Reviewer: kittykat91419 (Signed) [Report This]
    *SQUEE* Sequel? I know it must get annoying for authors to get all of those sequel requests, but please take this as the most wonderful compliment I can give you on your writing? I would love something like a brief epilogue, without plot or anything, just to show how Harry and Snape are doing in a few years. Keep up the most wonderful work with your other stories!!

    Author's Response: Oh, yeah, absolutely there will be a sequel.  Probably will get started this week.  I'm really just hunting for a title at this juncture.  ;-)  Thanks for the review!

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