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Reviews For Whelp
*Nearly chokes* So here I go again, lol. I'm so sad that this is the ending! I had to drag out reading the last chapter, into this morning just so I could enjoy it all before it finished :) But I'm really excited for what else you have in store for us :D I hope that Charlie and Severus continue to have mutual respect for each other once Sev becomes his Potions professor and all. It would be terrible if his influence in Harry's life was in jeapordy just because Severus can't keep his comments to himself, lol. All in all though, it was a very sweet ending to your story. I hope that Harry is finally at that point where he can clearly see where is place in Severus's life is now. Poor child. Lol. But he's progressed so much, I can't feel too sorry for him anymore. I can't wait to see what else you have to share with us!
The first chapters were so well-written that they were actually hard for me to read. I could feel Harry's pain, and it was awful to think of him being treated so terribly. Thank goodness Severus came and rescued him! I loved how you portrayed Severus' doubts and feelings of inadequacy as he tries to help Harry heal, and provide him with the love and care he desperately needs. And poor little Harry. I just want to hug and hug him. He's so fragile and afraid. But it's lovely to see him slowly coming to trust his new father and to be happy as a child should be. Interesting to see Draco and Harry being friends, and I can't wait to see how that will develop. I'm so excited that you're going to write a sequel, too! I'll be looking out for it!
This whole story was really one of the best abused Harry and Snape adopts him stories that I have read. Absolutly excellent job and I'll be on the lookout for the sequel!
virtual hugs and kisses ~Jamie
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