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Reviews For Whelp
Title: Chapter 27 03 Sep 2007 6:38 pm
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    GRRRRRRRRRR. It cut off EVERYTHING after:

    *Nearly chokes*

    So here I go again, lol.

    I'm so sad that this is the ending! I had to drag out reading the last chapter, into this morning just so I could enjoy it all before it finished :) But I'm really excited for what else you have in store for us :D

    I hope that Charlie and Severus continue to have mutual respect for each other once Sev becomes his Potions professor and all. It would be terrible if his influence in Harry's life was in jeapordy just because Severus can't keep his comments to himself, lol.

    All in all though, it was a very sweet ending to your story. I hope that Harry is finally at that point where he can clearly see where is place in Severus's life is now. Poor child. Lol. But he's progressed so much, I can't feel too sorry for him anymore.

    I can't wait to see what else you have to share with us!
Title: Chapter 27 03 Sep 2007 5:54 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Congratulations on "Whelp" being a featured story! I just read it and it certainly deserves to be. It's a wonderful story.

    The first chapters were so well-written that they were actually hard for me to read. I could feel Harry's pain, and it was awful to think of him being treated so terribly. Thank goodness Severus came and rescued him!

    I loved how you portrayed Severus' doubts and feelings of inadequacy as he tries to help Harry heal, and provide him with the love and care he desperately needs.

    And poor little Harry. I just want to hug and hug him. He's so fragile and afraid. But it's lovely to see him slowly coming to trust his new father and to be happy as a child should be.

    Interesting to see Draco and Harry being friends, and I can't wait to see how that will develop.

    I'm so excited that you're going to write a sequel, too! I'll be looking out for it!
Title: Chapter 27 03 Sep 2007 5:49 pm
Reviewer: Mango (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *wets self* :)
Title: Chapter 27 03 Sep 2007 8:46 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Such a sweet ending! I'm feeling all sappy now after reading that. :)

    This whole story was really one of the best abused Harry and Snape adopts him stories that I have read. Absolutly excellent job and I'll be on the lookout for the sequel!
Title: Chapter 27 03 Sep 2007 8:42 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good way to end this awesome story XD Cant wait to read the sequel!

    virtual hugs and kisses
    ~Jamie
Title: Chapter 27 03 Sep 2007 4:08 am
Reviewer: owlsaway (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing it with us!
Title: Chapter 27 03 Sep 2007 3:46 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent ending. As I was reading the three stories, I had felt this one might be nearing the end, and your final chapter felt very "right." Overall, some truly strong writing and characterization. I love the way you kept everyone very much in character.
Title: Chapter 27 03 Sep 2007 2:45 am
Reviewer: Dino1Draco (Signed) [Report This]
    LOVE THIS STORY. I was about to cry now that it is complete but you said your doing a sequel so I'm happy now.
Title: Chapter 27 03 Sep 2007 2:39 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have enjoyed reading this story very much. I liked how you built up the realationship between Harry and Servus and how Draco, Ron and Charlie were introduced into the mix. Thank you for the story.
Title: Chapter 27 03 Sep 2007 2:12 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Congratulations on Whelp becoming a featured story! It was definitely well-deserved. I'm SO GLAD you're staring a sequel soon!! I became slightly faint when I saw that this was the last chapter...lol. But I think you chose to end this part of the story at exactly the right point. It's as if Harry and Severus have completed a phase in their lives and are ready to move on. I seriously can't wait for the sequel! Thank you for writing such amazing stories :)

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