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Title: Chapter 27 28 Mar 2008 3:05 am
Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story! I was referred to this site because of my love of Harry and Snape and this is the first story that caught my eye and I loved it!
Title: Chapter 10 26 Mar 2008 7:59 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    awe! that is sooo sweet!
Title: Chapter 5 26 Mar 2008 7:22 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    i can't wait to see what he has in store for the dursleys.
Title: Chapter 2 26 Mar 2008 6:59 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    man...i feel bad for harry! another good chapter!
Title: Chapter 1 26 Mar 2008 6:54 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    man that was disgusting! great first chapter though!
Title: Chapter 18 04 Feb 2008 7:29 am
Reviewer: Joey Dallesandro (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just wanted to say that I love your characterization of a seven-year-old Harry. You write Harry's seven-year-old POV very well.
Title: Chapter 27 03 Feb 2008 7:53 am
Reviewer: MistyMossflower (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story was fantastic!! ^_^
Title: Chapter 21 04 Jan 2008 11:16 pm
Reviewer: Malora (Signed) [Report This]
    You know, I'm not one for child fics, but somehow, you sold me on this one! Your fic is one of the reasons I won't say "I'll never read…" whatever, because when it's written well, I completely forget I'm not partial to child fics!

    When Severus tugs Harry's lip out from between his teeth, it gets me every time! Such a beautifully realized little detail that shows how much he cares. And Fang's drool trailing away in a line...ick! I could see the drool so perfectly, it made my stomach churn. At least Harry doesn't seem to mind.

    Oh, and I love the teaser lines at the end of chapters that make me want to read the next chapter right away.

    Thank you for posting this!
Title: Chapter 27 06 Dec 2007 7:57 am
Reviewer: violet_star77@hotmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this is so fabulous. i am so glad that you already started the other one so i can go start in on it!! you are fabulous, your depiction of young abused harry is fabulous and you do a great job with snape. i think had someone intervened earlier, like in this story, he could have been a very different person. you do a good job of showing that, but you keep him in character as well. fabulous job!!
    ~violet
Title: Chapter 27 16 Nov 2007 7:14 am
Reviewer: Tabitha (Anonymous) [Report This]
    After reading Better Be Slytherin!, of course I had to check out your profile and found this marvelous work. I loved it. I love watching Snape care for a young Harry and I love little Ron and Draco too.

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