| Title: Chapter 26
| 15 Nov 2007 12:51 pm
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| Reviewer: snapes lover (Anonymous)
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Hi im loving this story but just to let you no, tomatoes are poisonous to dogs lol
| Title: Chapter 10
| 13 Oct 2007 4:36 am
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Anonymous)
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Oh, I am so very glad I read this story. It's wonderfully written, especially the last few chapters with Harry at Severus' house and the adoption ritual! Oh, the language of it was just so very touching!
I really look forward to seeing where you take this from here... and how this twist of the tale from canon will affect the events when Harry comes of an age to attend Hogwarts in four more years.
The only reason I'm rating this a 7 is to have 8, 9, and 10 available for the terrific chapters yet to come.Well done!
| Title: Chapter 27
| 24 Sep 2007 6:59 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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You sure like to put poor Harry through a lot of shit but I like how Sev handles it. That parenting isn't easy and dealing with an abuse child takes a special touch and what is normal for one is traumatic for another. Always wondered why with the miracles of the wizarding world they don't have growth hormones for poor short Harry!
| Title: Chapter 27
| 10 Sep 2007 11:55 am
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| Reviewer: Morgaine Malfoy (Anonymous)
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AAAAAw that is so cute, can't wait for your new story. ^^
I really liked how you stayed true to the personalities of the characters. Thanks for an excellent read!
| Title: Chapter 27
| 07 Sep 2007 6:57 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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I give you 9 chocolate truffles for excellent writing, 10 bonbons for a very engaging story, and 10 chocolate fudge sundaes for making me cry. I truly enjoyed your story, and I'm eagerly waiting for the sequel.
"Seemingly aware of the admiration he'd inspired, Charlie doled out praise and approval whenever possible, and Severus spoke to him about it over hot cocoa one evening after the two younger boys had gone to bed."
I wish I had a brother like Charlie ... :C
I'm so happy about reading this story, and then again so sad that it's over. But then I'm happy again that you are going to write a sequel, so I guess in the end it all works out.
I think next I have to start reviewing "Better Be Slytherin!" because I love that story too XD
Author's Response: Thank you, Sweartoad, for your wicked kind reviews. I got a good chuckle out of your enthusiastic praises and turns of phrase. I'm already working on the sequel, but still don't have a title . . . Ah, well. Soon. Thanks again! -- rachel
"She turned to Dumbledore and lifted her eyebrows as if to ask what she was to do with a recalcitrant child in her care."
LOLOLOL XD That's right Molly, put him in his place XD Plus Charlie is so awesome in this chapter. And I'm glad to see Harry is trying his hand at Occulmency XD At least this time it's like 10 million times less painful than what we've come to expect XD
"Please speak up, Draco, Severus thought. Show Harry you are worthy to be his friend."
Hopefully Draco will learn in time XD Also - Molly?! Molly is like my favouritest character and is made of awesomesauce XD Plus it's good to know that Ron and Draco will have a chance to get to know each other, what with Harry being the metaphorical glue C:
PLUS MORE SNAPE/HARRY-NESS! What more is there to say?? XD
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