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Reviews For Whelp
Mwahaha, you LIAR. I told you that Harry would soon have you converted - he's really quite lovely when you get to know him XD Plus Harry is finally over his magic-on-purpose thing. Have I mentioned I love Snape/Harry love moments? They're just so ... fulfilling and full of love XD
But YAY! for Snape/Draco reconcilliation, and double YAY! for Snape/Harry love. I have an awesome sentence for you, too XD "My father's dead," Harry mumbled, and the words hit Severus like a Centaur's kick to the chest. "Car crash . . ."
And I always thought the giant squid was a kind monster. I didn't realise he was just being that way so he could snatch up students to eat XD But SNAPE! You are an idiot. You are supposed to take Draco under your wing and save him from his father's EVUL ways, not shout at him and tell him to piss off. I thought we had a little chat about your interpersonal skills ... ? Well, whatever, your conscience has been dug out enough that there's no doubt in my mind you'll be feeling its full affects very shortly XD
I like how this is a very long process, the rehabilitation that Harry is going through XD On another note: Draco - cute? Yes. Spoilt? Definately! Something terrible is going to happen to Harry, I can just see it, and then Draco will be sorry. Then again, it will open up his eyes and (hopefully) improve his character, so it will eventually end up as a good thing. I have every faith in you to make sure everything ends up alright XD
"Daddy?" Harry whispered back, his deep green eyes hardly open a crack. "Please don't go. Don't leave me." Plus the fact that he FINALLY breaks down and starts crying. I love love LOVE how Harry cries very late in the story. It would be really weird if he suddenly started crying like two days after he got rescued from the Dursleys, because these things just don't happen like that. But you've given him a chance to settle in and start to feel as though he is safe, which is so nice XD It made me feel all nice and gooey XD
Seriously, what is there not to love about Snape/Harry love? If reading that doesn't send shivers up your spine, I don't know what will.
That dream has probably dredged up some huge angst factor for Snape XD (I know I shouldn't be so cheerful but seeing Snape confront himself and begin to chip away the black tarnish that is covering his soul is so nice to read XD)
"Draco face was reddening, and it contrasted quite a lot with his pale, slicked-back hair. "I don't know! But it's bad, whatever it is, and they are it." LOL! Sometimes you are such a noob, Draco. Cute, but a noob. "Severus wondered briefly how far off the grounds he could get if he were to wipe that expression off Malfoy's face permanently." Probably not very far - I daresay you'd be stopped by the white peacocks, who Lucius has probably trained to live off meat XD
Poor Harry :C But you have Snapey now, so you won't have to worry about anything because if he had his way you'd be wrapped up in bubble-wrap XD I like how Snape is a bit dubious about Draco. But don't worry, he'll be nice because Harry has that sort of affect on people XD As always: I love this story XD
Um ... yeah. Sometimes my brain runs away from me XD |
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