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Title: Chapter 24 05 Sep 2007 3:27 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "I didn't scream," Draco insisted. "I was just calling your name. You know, in a concerned way."

    Mwahaha, you LIAR. I told you that Harry would soon have you converted - he's really quite lovely when you get to know him XD

    Plus Harry is finally over his magic-on-purpose thing. Have I mentioned I love Snape/Harry love moments? They're just so ... fulfilling and full of love XD
Title: Chapter 23 05 Sep 2007 3:20 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    POPPEH. You gain points for chewing Snapey out, definately. But then you lose them for making Harry feel like a piece of doggy doo-doo. So now I don't know what to do with you. I shall have to think on it ...

    But YAY! for Snape/Draco reconcilliation, and double YAY! for Snape/Harry love.

    I have an awesome sentence for you, too XD

    "My father's dead," Harry mumbled, and the words hit Severus like a Centaur's kick to the chest. "Car crash . . ."
Title: Chapter 22 05 Sep 2007 3:15 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "Tears tracked down the bigger boy's cheeks. "S-sorry, Uncle Sev. I couldn't reach him. I tried, but then the squid just exploded!"

    And I always thought the giant squid was a kind monster. I didn't realise he was just being that way so he could snatch up students to eat XD

    But SNAPE! You are an idiot. You are supposed to take Draco under your wing and save him from his father's EVUL ways, not shout at him and tell him to piss off. I thought we had a little chat about your interpersonal skills ... ? Well, whatever, your conscience has been dug out enough that there's no doubt in my mind you'll be feeling its full affects very shortly XD
Title: Chapter 21 05 Sep 2007 3:11 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "Harry," Father murmured, and Harry chanced a look at him, to see sadness and hurt in his eyes."

    I like how this is a very long process, the rehabilitation that Harry is going through XD

    On another note: Draco - cute? Yes. Spoilt? Definately! Something terrible is going to happen to Harry, I can just see it, and then Draco will be sorry. Then again, it will open up his eyes and (hopefully) improve his character, so it will eventually end up as a good thing.

    I have every faith in you to make sure everything ends up alright XD
Title: Chapter 20 05 Sep 2007 3:07 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter was very nice and cathartic XD

    "Daddy?" Harry whispered back, his deep green eyes hardly open a crack. "Please don't go. Don't leave me."

    Plus the fact that he FINALLY breaks down and starts crying. I love love LOVE how Harry cries very late in the story. It would be really weird if he suddenly started crying like two days after he got rescued from the Dursleys, because these things just don't happen like that. But you've given him a chance to settle in and start to feel as though he is safe, which is so nice XD It made me feel all nice and gooey XD
Title: Chapter 19 05 Sep 2007 3:02 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "His face was pasty and white, and trembles wracked his frail body. Blood had soaked the bandage on his left hand. Severus gathered the boy in his arms and ran back down the hill."

    Seriously, what is there not to love about Snape/Harry love? If reading that doesn't send shivers up your spine, I don't know what will.
Title: Chapter 18 05 Sep 2007 2:57 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay, Hagrid XD I was wondering when he'd show up. I like how he's very accepting of Harry and his new situation, despite the fact that he probably was close to James and Lily.

    That dream has probably dredged up some huge angst factor for Snape XD (I know I shouldn't be so cheerful but seeing Snape confront himself and begin to chip away the black tarnish that is covering his soul is so nice to read XD)
Title: Chapter 17 05 Sep 2007 2:41 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    I have two favourite lines:

    "Draco face was reddening, and it contrasted quite a lot with his pale, slicked-back hair. "I don't know! But it's bad, whatever it is, and they are it."

    LOL! Sometimes you are such a noob, Draco. Cute, but a noob.

    "Severus wondered briefly how far off the grounds he could get if he were to wipe that expression off Malfoy's face permanently."

    Probably not very far - I daresay you'd be stopped by the white peacocks, who Lucius has probably trained to live off meat XD
Title: Chapter 16 05 Sep 2007 2:34 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "He didn't want to say why, that if he didn't know what they were yelling about, or what they were planning to do to him, then he couldn't be prepared."

    Poor Harry :C But you have Snapey now, so you won't have to worry about anything because if he had his way you'd be wrapped up in bubble-wrap XD

    I like how Snape is a bit dubious about Draco. But don't worry, he'll be nice because Harry has that sort of affect on people XD

    As always: I love this story XD
Title: Chapter 15 05 Sep 2007 2:26 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Captain Snape flies to the rescue once again! What will happen next? Stay tuned for more in the next installment!

    Um ... yeah. Sometimes my brain runs away from me XD

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