Excellent ending. As I was reading the three stories, I had felt this one might be nearing the end, and your final chapter felt very "right." Overall, some truly strong writing and characterization. I love the way you kept everyone very much in character.
LOVE THIS STORY. I was about to cry now that it is complete but you said your doing a sequel so I'm happy now.
| Title: Chapter 27
| 03 Sep 2007 2:39 am
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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I have enjoyed reading this story very much. I liked how you built up the realationship between Harry and Servus and how Draco, Ron and Charlie were introduced into the mix. Thank you for the story.
Congratulations on Whelp becoming a featured story! It was definitely well-deserved. I'm SO GLAD you're staring a sequel soon!! I became slightly faint when I saw that this was the last chapter...lol. But I think you chose to end this part of the story at exactly the right point. It's as if Harry and Severus have completed a phase in their lives and are ready to move on. I seriously can't wait for the sequel! Thank you for writing such amazing stories :)
Aww, that was great. I loved your story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
This story was just so cute and... all-around terrific. I loved it. Definitely one of my favorites.
I've read this chapter so many times I thought I'd just drop in a quick review before I went to bed - I love how you've done Snape, how he's jealous and when he's all like:
"He tended to rely heavily on that expression when he was unsure of something. Or frustrated. Or bored."
It's nice to know that even Severus Snape can be unsure. Even though he's trying to hide it XD But we know better, Snapey! Oh, and btw, I've made it my personal mission to review every chapter of this story, because I've read it so many times on ff.net and enjoyed it so much that it's high time I give something back C:
Can I just say that I love how you've still made Harry defiant (well, sort of) and how he won't eat the dog food. It's really nice how you've sort of hinted that, even though he's put up with so much, he still knows he's worth more than a dog.
To steal another author's phrasing, you are made of awesomesauce XD
I absolutely loved this last scene with Harry and Snape. "Sploden Snap" was so cute, I laughed outloud and wished, again, that I could just take little Harry home. I love it when Harry is able to laugh at the things Snape says.
Oh, and thank goodness Harry's nightmares are getting better! I think I found myself breathing innnn and ouuuut with Harry when Snape was trying to calm him...lol.
OH! Another scene I liked was when Harry, Draco, and Ron were eating at Hagrid's and Harry was on his stomach, hovering over his food...I thought that was a great description!
I had a warm feeling every time Snape corrected Harry's use of words.
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