| Title: Chapter 25
| 28 Aug 2007 12:54 am
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| Reviewer: rachel (Anonymous)
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Another awesome chapter, not my favourite so far but still pretty great!
Ms.Weasly is ok!
Why do I love it so much when Snape retrieves Harry's bottom lip from his teeth? lol. I am SO weird.
Okay, now, Draco is clearly in need of a good wallop. Well, maybe not THAT...but I'm currently shaking my head at the little menace. I loved, however, the scene where Harry lied to keep Draco out of trouble. He's so sweet...I adore him in this story.
OH!...And how clever to include Charlie! For some reason I was expecting one of the twins when Molly spoke of another son. I can't wait to read the next chapter and see how Harry, Draco, and Ron interact. A seven-year-old Ron...how adorable.
Great job, as always :)
| Title: Chapter 25
| 27 Aug 2007 8:47 am
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| Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous)
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yay hooray Ronniekins XD and Charlie how cute! cant wait to read what these for will be up to ;)
I am worried. Harry seemed like to follow Draco around. But Draco isn't reliable enough. He cannot be a good leader. And Harry cannot be the savior if he remains a follower. I hope Ron's brave and loyalty can help Harry.
Draco seemed jealous of Ron already. I wonder how the two could get along. Looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon please.
Nice chapter, Harry is SO sweet. I can't wait for more.
Hey your the Author enjoy your cliffhangers, laugh at all of us that have to wait to see what happens. ENJOY that power.
Oh dear! Well, I suppose Severus should just be glad the Molly didn't bring the twins. *tries to imagine that group of five**fails* Poor Harry, with Molly there to mother everyone involved, he might just get the fright of a lifetime. I'm somewhat surprised he's taking to children so easily after the abuse from Dudley, but *shrugs* everyone is different. Anyway, keep up the wonderful work; I'm always surprised at how quickly you update all three of your stories, and how great they are to read.
I love these kind of long chpters! :)
I love stories with younger Harry, and this is no exception - you've characterised him really well, and I am very impressed with the scene at the end where he's going through the trash - I think you've illustrated Harry so well in this first chapter. I'm definately in love XD
| Title: Chapter 23
| 25 Aug 2007 12:42 am
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| Reviewer: rachel (Anonymous)
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waaa! so emotional!
I think draco should be adopted too.
Ha Ha Ha lucius!you lose!
| Title: Chapter 22
| 25 Aug 2007 12:27 am
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| Reviewer: rachel (Anonymous)
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aww poor Draco. I hope he stays!
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