Wonderful chapter! That was cute when Draco corrected Harry's grammer. Are Draco and Harry going to be friends?
Author's Response: At least for now, yes. We'll see how things shake out later. ;-)
I loved Filch's fate. The Headmaster was surely showing his true colors in this one. Now if he survives Draco, too, he'll be Super Hero Harry! hehehe
Author's Response: Oh, goodness, I hope not! I'd have to get him a cape and little red boots, and it would be wrong. ;-)
lol...at least Draco seems to be trying hard not to be a little jerk. I love it.
So Filch is handless, huh? I think that's brilliant. He always was my least favorite character.
These speedy updates really make my day at work go a lot faster. lol. This was a great chapter!
Author's Response: My pleasure. Thanks for the review! :-)
What was the white light?
Author's Response: Details on that are forthcoming, I promise. :-)
| Title: Chapter 15
| 07 Aug 2007 12:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Laume (Anonymous)
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oooh! Filch is in trouble! Good! *sulks* mean old man being nasty to sweet little Harry...hope Snape disembowels him like a toad.
Ooh, chocolate - I could use some of that :D This was a very interesting chapter. I liked it; though - to be honest - I'm not sure how I feel about Snape having told Harry so much at such a young age. At seven, that's likely to increase his nightmares and paranoia, if he's capable of truly understanding any of it at all. But, I still love the story to death, makes me feel all warm and gushy to see little Harry learning to be a real child with Sev's help, so it's all good ;)
Anxious for the next chapter. Very keen on learning about that magic and what Severus will do, especially seeing as Filch was more or less suffocating Harry. What a sad, sad man.
Keira
Author's Response: Hi Kiera, Yeah, I worried a bit about the timing of Sev's info, and Harry's age, but at the same time, he's not one to really mince truths, is he? There'll be repercussions to his forthrightness, of course, starting with Tea at the Malfoys . . . ;-)
Excellent chapter! I'd been wondering if Filch was going to pop in and sure enough he did. I imagine Snape will make sure Filch knows to never touch Harry again after this. Tea with the Malfoy's should also be very entertaining!
Author's Response: Tea with the Malfoy's should also be very entertaining! I'll do my best to make it so. :-) Thanks for the review!
| Title: Chapter 15
| 07 Aug 2007 4:59 am
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| Reviewer: Shdwcat27@suddenlink.net (Anonymous)
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Filch has stepped in it big time. hahahaha. I can't wait to see what's next. Thanks for the update & the chocolate. Mmmm. I love chocolate.
Great chapter! I love that Harry feels such trust in his father coming to fix things. Filch would frighten just about anyone but a small child? Yikes!
Author's Response: Yeah, Filch's kind of an ogre in general, but I can imagine the horror he presents to a 7 year old! Thank for the review! --rachel
Two stories at once...you are quite amazing. lol. I love this story just as much as Shadows. And dear lord....there's nothing I like better than some Harry/Draco interaction. Will they be civil to each other, I wonder?
Author's Response: Eh, civility's overrated. ;-) We'll just have to see, right? Thanks for the review! --- rachel
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