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Reviews For Whelp
Author's Response: Thanks! By rights, they should be under it for far, far longer, and maybe go to Azkaban, too, but there's a limit with how much stage time I want to give them, as I find them completely despicable. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on a chapter for "Shadows" right now, but I should get to Whelp tomorrow, most likely.
Author's Response: Thanks!
I like that you had Snape and Harry clear up the miscommunication between the words Freak and Magic when you did. Poor little Harry shouldn't have to live through that confusion anymore than he had to, lol. I loved the ending of that scene too. Little kids are so precious. I like the spell Severus used on the Dursley's as well, though I hope the repercussions are too harsh for five year old Dudley. Though he was a bullying git, he's still a small child who is moreso learning from his parents still than not. In any case, I think it's a smart idea to have their deeds come back to them. Good thinking :) Can't wait for the next chapter :D Keira Author's Response: Hi Kiera! Thanks for your review, every time I see one, I get all happy. :-) There'll be loads more miscommunications between Snape and the li'l nipper, don't fret, but this one had to get cleared up, although there will also be a lot more ocnversaations about how magic isn't bad, and neither are the people who use it. Mostly. As for Dudders, he's actually 7 (same age as Harry) but I get your point. He won't get anything back but what he's dished out. I'll have Sev explain more about the spell in an upcoming chapter, which should be . . . tomorrow? I hope? Thanks again, --rachel
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you *did* enjoy the next chapter. ;-)
Author's Response: Thanks! I had fun writing the chapter, as I have a yen on against the Dursleys, always have.
I look forward to the update! You seem to have put up quite a few chapters in such a short amount of time, and that has me excited :D Great job! Keira Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Keira! I have a lot of time to write at work, so I can get one chapter done a day, just about. I alternate between this story and "Walk the Shadows," which I just updated today. I appreciate your kind words, and hope the story continues to appeal. I'm certainly having fun writing it. Thanks again! |
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