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Title: Chapter 13 02 Aug 2007 9:30 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Six years under that curse! Boy are they in for some fun times. Sounds good to me. Good chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  By rights, they should be under it for far, far longer, and maybe go to Azkaban, too, but there's a limit with how much stage time I want to give them, as I find them completely despicable.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 12 02 Aug 2007 7:48 pm
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AWESOME CHAPTER!!! Hope you can update soon!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm working on a chapter for "Shadows" right now, but I should get to Whelp tomorrow, most likely.
Title: Chapter 12 02 Aug 2007 2:52 am
Reviewer: Kristi Parrish (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellect. I am really liking the story.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 12 01 Aug 2007 5:53 pm
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Because I was ultimately bored, I went to look at the reviews you received for this last chapter, and I saw that my review somehow never made it :( I wrote out a nice sized review and all, lol. Oh well, I'll be more than happy to write you another one.

    I like that you had Snape and Harry clear up the miscommunication between the words Freak and Magic when you did. Poor little Harry shouldn't have to live through that confusion anymore than he had to, lol. I loved the ending of that scene too. Little kids are so precious.

    I like the spell Severus used on the Dursley's as well, though I hope the repercussions are too harsh for five year old Dudley. Though he was a bullying git, he's still a small child who is moreso learning from his parents still than not. In any case, I think it's a smart idea to have their deeds come back to them. Good thinking :)

    Can't wait for the next chapter :D

    Keira

    Author's Response:

    Hi Kiera!  Thanks for your review, every time I see one, I get all happy.  :-)  There'll be loads more miscommunications between Snape and the li'l nipper, don't fret, but this one had to get cleared up, although there will also be a lot more ocnversaations about how magic isn't bad, and neither are the people who use it.  Mostly.  As for Dudders, he's actually 7 (same age as Harry) but I get your point.  He won't get anything back but what he's dished out.  I'll have Sev explain more about the spell in an upcoming chapter, which should be . . . tomorrow?  I hope?

     Thanks again,

    --rachel

Title: Chapter 1 01 Aug 2007 5:00 pm
Reviewer: Becky (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Are you telling me that the neigbors never noticed Harry chined up in the back yard? You need to think-out your story a bit more.
Title: Chapter 12 01 Aug 2007 11:56 am
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    woo hoo! go Severus!!!
Title: Chapter 12 01 Aug 2007 8:10 am
Reviewer: Vicki (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, wonderful! I loved how Snape comforted Harry, and it's interesting that Harry could already put up a silencing charm so young without even knowing how to do it. I *loved* Snape's revenge on the Dursleys--a particularly fitting one. And it was very innovative to have him learn about Harry's treatment from the ones who so abused him. Thanks so much, and I look forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I hope you *did* enjoy the next chapter.  ;-)
Title: Chapter 12 01 Aug 2007 5:11 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! I am sooo glad he extracted revenge on them! And the punishment is perfect too. :)
Title: Chapter 12 01 Aug 2007 2:49 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Oh wow. That was.. harsh but they deserved it. Poor Harry. Awesome pace in this chapter, it felt like it moved fast, but there was quite a bit happening in it. I enjoy seeing Snape's interactions with Harry. Thanks for sharing!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I had fun writing the chapter, as I have a yen on against the Dursleys, always have. 
Title: Chapter 11 31 Jul 2007 8:56 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm counting down to Wednesday, so I hope you're going to pull through with your promise! ;) I've seen this story updated a couple of times recently but never had the chance to look at it until tonight. I'm particularly partial to feral child-like stories, in that odd way I'm sure you can understand, and so it was a pleasant surprise to find out how well this one is written. I'm quite impressed with your ability to use words and emotions as you do. You certainly know what you're doing :)

    I look forward to the update! You seem to have put up quite a few chapters in such a short amount of time, and that has me excited :D Great job!

    Keira

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Keira!  I have a lot of time to write at work, so I can get one chapter done a day, just about.  I alternate between this story and "Walk the Shadows," which I just updated today.  I appreciate your kind words, and hope the story continues to appeal.  I'm certainly having fun writing it.  Thanks again!

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