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Title: Chapter 10 27 Jul 2007 7:24 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww how cute! I loved this chapter!
Title: Chapter 10 27 Jul 2007 7:13 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Chapter 9 26 Jul 2007 11:28 pm
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chap. please update soon!!!
Title: Chapter 9 26 Jul 2007 4:42 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww... poor Harry. you managed to do the awkwardness very well. Once thing I'm wondering is, when if Harry going to get a bath? I know there were cleaning spells used on his, but Snape said he could still smell him, and it's been over a day since.I'd think Harry would want to wash after that ordeal.

    Great chapter, and I love how Harry is calling Snape father. I can't wait to read more of this fic! It's fantastic.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!  As for baths, Harry will likely get a proper one before he gets dressed, but Snape did wash him by hand after he did some healing, so it wasn't just the Scourgify.
Title: Chapter 8 26 Jul 2007 4:26 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwww, yay! yay! Love it. So cute. Poor Harry. I liked the description of the bandage on his foot. And it's so funny how he thought that he was supposed to be a House Elf. I loved how Snape told him that he was going to be hid son, like it was some sort of occupation. XD Cute.

    "...The ward must be based in truest love to continue the protections his mother lent him. But you loved Lily, didn't you, my dear boy?"" that is a GREAT idea! Nice call! The wards could work on LOVE! That's why Lily's family had to take Harry, because Petunia would have loved her, or hopefully so. And is Snape did too... nice going! You used blood here, but i think other people will be using wards based on love some time...

    "Either Ligilimancy or observant eyes could have told him the truth." It's Legilimency. :)

    "But if I can not do it . . ."

    "Then he will need to go back. I'm sorry, Severus."

    Wow. Playing on he guilt, huh Dumbledore? Great chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review!  I couldn't remember how to spell Legilimency, and both ways I tried it looked wrong, so thanks for that, too!  About the adoptiopn and love, I figured, there's such an emphasis on love as the power the Dark Lord knows not, that it would be the perfect basis for the blood wards.

     Thanks again!

Title: Chapter 9 26 Jul 2007 11:11 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    I was thrilled to see this updated tonight, by the way. And *two* chapters!

    Sad ending to this chapter. Poor little Harry.

    On the other hand, things seem to be going pretty well for him. Let's hope the adoption goes through with no problems.

    Author's Response:

    Well, now, where's the fun of "no problems"?  :-)

     I should have anew chapter today or tomorrow.  Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 8 26 Jul 2007 11:10 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape is going to have to learn some patience, quick.

    I wonder if all of this is going to cramp his teaching style.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!  Since this will be Snape's first go at teaching, this fall, he won't have too much of a style to cramp yet.  But yeah, patience isn't really his strong suit when it comes to interpersonal skills.  Potions, sure, but people . . .  :)
Title: Chapter 9 26 Jul 2007 8:15 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Two chapters today! Both were excellent!

    Author's Response:

    And another!  Thanks for reading and reviewing . ..

Title: Chapter 8 26 Jul 2007 8:09 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww little Harry gets a father!
Title: Chapter 7 25 Jul 2007 8:10 pm
Reviewer: shiva (Anonymous) [Report This]
    please update soon
    I can't wait to see what will happen next

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