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Title: Chapter 7 24 Jul 2007 1:59 am
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    awesome. i can't wait to read more.
Title: Chapter 7 23 Jul 2007 10:46 pm
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow. Awesome story!!! Hope you can update soon!!
Title: Chapter 7 23 Jul 2007 10:40 pm
Reviewer: HakuoBlaze (Signed) [Report This]
    poor harry!! go Snape! love the story!
Title: Chapter 7 23 Jul 2007 9:22 pm
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    Evil Dumbledore. I knew he would try something like that. I like Snape's indecisiveness, it seems very realistic.

    Excellent chapter... frustratingly short... I'll be eagerly waiting for more!
Title: Chapter 7 23 Jul 2007 2:42 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Lovely.

    I love Snape's rage in this. Very well done. Dumbledore seems in character. :)
Title: Chapter 6 23 Jul 2007 11:49 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Great chapter! Great emotions, great pace and great development so far!

    "Harry bit his lip and guessed he was a house elf for Master Snape now, too."

    Oh! Harry thinks he's a house elf! The poor boy! And he likes the idea. Oh, poor child.

    "Who were these watchers? Severus wondered. And how many of them could he strangle before he was sent to Azkaban?"

    LOL!
Title: Chapter 5 23 Jul 2007 11:37 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor child. The care in this chapter is wonderful though. Wonderful writing with the details here.
Title: Chapter 4 23 Jul 2007 11:34 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    POor Harry. :*( Poor boy. I hope that he isn't too emotionally scared after this. I think Snape is going to beat himself up about not checking up on him for a long time to come.
Title: Chapter 3 23 Jul 2007 11:32 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Once or twice a week! Not once, Snape! :P The git.

    I just really noticed this paragraph clearly, I didn't the first time:

    "He has just turned seven, Severus, yes." In truth, Severus knew exactly how old the Potter boy was, could calculate it down to the hour if need be. He'd had to, in the maddening months between his one short encounter with Lily and her subsequent whirlwind marriage to that idiot, James. But no matter how he counted or calculated, the numbers always came up the same. The whelp was James', not his.

    Hmmm.... :)

    Author's Response:

    Hmmm....

    Hmmmm, indeed. :-) I meant for that part to be deliberate foreshadowing of one kind, and along with Dumbledore's vague-ish statement at the end of chapter 7, things could go either way. Thanks for reviewing!

    --Rachel

Title: Chapter 2 23 Jul 2007 11:30 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. So he can unclip the leash. Why doesn't he? Does he not know where he really could go?

    Vernon is so nasty. I hope he gets what's coming to him.

    Author's Response:

    HI Jan!  The issue over unclipping the leash will be dealt with a bit later, and yeah, I have plans for Dursley.  Very special plans.  Thanks for reviewing!

     

    --Rachel


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