This is brilliant!
looking forward to more,
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| Title: Chapter 5
| 21 Jul 2007 12:05 am
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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Awesome story! Hope you can update soon.
No! I've reached the end! Please update soon! Please!!!
I love it so far! You do a wonderful job of making Harry's predicament and emotions seem real. I can't wait to find out what happens...
I wonder how Snape is planning to prove that he had good reason for taking Harry from the Dursleys. If he heals everything, and Dumbledore decides to play dumb to save face, Dumbledore could try to send Harry back. That would probably be the end of Harry right there, even if he physically survives it.
I can't wait for Snape's revenge.
Finally! It was really maddening, waiting for Snape to get there.
It's hard to see right now how Harry can recover from this.
Great explanation for why Snape decides to take him, instead of dropping him off where he could be someone else's problem.
A nice idea for why Snape is going to go check on Harry.
Dumbledore is such a slacker. Who exactly did he assign the job of watching Harry? Really, you'd think he'd at least be competent in delegating jobs he doesn't want to do himself.
Really good start! It really sets things up. Poor Harry. If he doesn't get rescued soon....
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