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Title: Chapter 5 20 Jul 2007 7:56 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww Snape is being so cautious and careful while healing poor little Harry's wounds. I really hope you can write a revenge type of scene where Snape curses the Dursley's or something like that. Seince Vernon treated Harry like a dog, then perhaps he could be cursed to bark rather than speak. That'd be interesting! Well I'll leave you to decided something interesting and I look forward to reading what happens next!
Title: Chapter 5 20 Jul 2007 7:35 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Harry! Poor, poor Harry. But i'm so glad that Snape found him and that he is being healed. I liked how much Snape seemed to care for him. The healing descriptions were done very well. I'm glad that Snape waited before working on his ankle.

    There was one paragraph that was in italics, that I don't think you meant to be in italics:

    "Harry was his name, not whelp or boy or freak. And someone was saying it. No one had since . . . since Miss Egglestrom..."

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the catch!  I only meant the first word to be italicized.  It's fixed now.

Title: Chapter 1 20 Jul 2007 6:20 am
Reviewer: Bratling (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes! You've started posting this here! Of the newer stories and authors out there, you're among my favorites. Can't wait for chapter six!
Title: Chapter 4 19 Jul 2007 5:59 pm
Reviewer: Sarah (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is very well written I did wince at a few parts doing that to Harry! I hope they get what's coming to them. Doing that to a child they never get punished in the book for all the neglect they did to Harry either gits.

    Snape was right though taking Harry to St Mungo's would have created and outcry against muggles.
    Will Snape contact Dumbledore when he get's to Spinner's End? looking forward to more of this =)
Title: Chapter 4 18 Jul 2007 9:33 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I didn't at first think that the story would be good. I don't usually like extreme abuse stories. But yours holds promise. Your explanation of why Snape was going to the Dursley's was fresh and new, and his reason for taking Harry himself was, as well. It means that your story will undoubtedly hold much to look forward to. I'll happily do so.
Title: Chapter 4 18 Jul 2007 9:11 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent beginning. Enjoyed how you written the characters and I look forward to reading more of this story.
Title: Chapter 4 18 Jul 2007 11:32 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Snape saved him! Poor little Harry will probably freak out when he wakes up in some weird place. This is a wonderful story so far and I look forward to reading more soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks you for your enthusiastic response!  I should have the next chapter up by the weekend.  The story is also (or first, if you like) available at fanfiction.net.  Again, thank you for reading!
Title: Chapter 3 18 Jul 2007 11:25 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Snape will come save poor little Harry! Well hopefully he will. Excellent so far!
Title: Chapter 2 18 Jul 2007 11:22 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Eww I think I'd rather eat grass than dog food, although I hear Pedigree has some tasty canned food...
Title: Chapter 1 18 Jul 2007 11:17 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good start so far. :)

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