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Title: Chapter 15 28 Feb 2012 2:22 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    What did the white light do? I wish nelli hadn't made the boy think he was alone. She could have said where she was going or told Filch that Harry was allowed but Im glad Snape came and saved the day :)
Title: Chapter 14 28 Feb 2012 2:11 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwww I love how cute they were at Hogwarts but it seemed really sad when Harry said that he had to hida his not being a wizard from Snape
Title: Chapter 13 28 Feb 2012 1:57 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooh that was good. Thank you for being such a good writer and posting too.
Title: Chapter 10 28 Feb 2012 12:48 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a great chapter ending. And middle and beginning. What do the Dursleys think happened? Or did they just not care that Harry's gone.
Title: Chapter 9 28 Feb 2012 12:34 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwww for some reason that ending seemed so sad. And it was kind of creepy when Snape said that Harry would be his. But I still love Harry jumping to conclusions and Snape being perfect-you know: knowing how to react and what to say, not being to cuddly or mean etc. Thank you for writing this, it's such a pleasure to read
Title: Chapter 8 28 Feb 2012 12:20 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    This was great! I love Harry's conclusions anownow Snapes reactions are always just right. I hadn't considered a blood adoption, mostly because I've never heard of one before. Did you invent it or am I just not reading the right fanfictions?
Title: Chapter 7 28 Feb 2012 12:08 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    You could be? What is that supposed to mean?! That was cruel to leave the chapter hanging like that. Does Dumbledore mean that as long as you believe it's true the spell works or that they can somehow find a loophole or is Snape really the dad? But he already counted the days and knows Harry is not his, perhaps Lilly could have magically lengthened the pregnancy or she had Harry late. Well I guess ill find out in a second.
Title: Chapter 6 28 Feb 2012 12:00 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I like that Snape is willing to leave Dumbledore because of Harry's maltreatment and I particularly liked when Snape said that he'd try some first. Anyway this is a wonderful story so far and I can't wait to see what will happen next.
Title: Chapter 5 27 Feb 2012 5:35 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I get it but it seems very strange for Snape to show all of this emotion.
Title: Chapter 4 27 Feb 2012 5:27 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. I like how you ruled out all of the other options and well just everything.

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