Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 3 27 Feb 2012 5:18 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    That was cute-the counting to make sure. It's all so sad for Snape though. Does that mean that you are saying that Snape was with Lilly first? That's new I can't wait to find out what happened.
Title: Chapter 2 27 Feb 2012 5:12 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    That's so awful. I can't wait until Snape comes in and saves the day.
Title: Chapter 1 27 Feb 2012 4:57 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh this is so good I can't beleive this cliff hanger. It must have been awful waiting for the next chapter, I'm so glad the story is already completed so that I don't have to wait. I can already see why this was a featured story; but poor Harry.
Title: Chapter 20 07 Sep 2011 5:48 pm
Reviewer: topeswin (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a really fantastic story! I can't stop reading it, and that's a great sign.
Title: Chapter 27 25 Jul 2011 4:22 am
Reviewer: Sharon T (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Amazing story, going to read the sequel now:)
Title: Chapter 27 05 Jun 2011 5:13 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This has always been one of my favorite Adopted Harry stories - EVER! I just re-read it for the millionth time - still love it!
Title: Chapter 6 08 May 2011 10:19 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    This is very well written, and I feel so very bad for Harry!
Title: Chapter 27 23 Apr 2011 4:26 am
Reviewer: garfield090684 (Signed) [Report This]
    I truly loved this story and am amazed at how well you captured these characters. A wonderful read. Thank you.

    Write on!
Title: Chapter 2 14 Apr 2011 7:08 pm
Reviewer: garfield090684 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! This is quite powerful stuff the kind of thing in nightmares or written about in books but there are some VERY cruel people in this world and you have captured these characters well in your writing. The only thing I feel the need to point out is one typo.

    If you behave like a dog, you'll be treated as one. Should've know you were fit for living indoors with decent folk.

    The second sentence should read

    Should've known you weren't fit for living indorrs with decent folk.

    The way you have it now is a little confusing but its a great story! Write on!!!
Title: Chapter 27 08 Feb 2011 4:44 pm
Reviewer: Shhhh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a totally wonderful story - thanks so much! I can't wait to get started reading the sequel. I love the way you've humanized Snape, and I fell in love with Harry all over again. I hope Draco continues to be sweet! Totally brillant!

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