| Title: Chapter 26
| 07 Jan 2011 4:02 pm
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| Reviewer: moccanica (Anonymous)
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hey :)
i really like this story and i'm going to read the sequel right away :)
you are very talented and it was a pleasure to read your story ;)
there weren't too many mistakes:)
hugs
I'm such a goof, I tried to breathe in and out as I was reading it without realizing it and when I realized I was, I found I was backwards with my own reading! Talk about feeling silly!
I'm hoping somewhere you explain what exactly happened in the tub. My mind is envisioning all sorts of things.
Of course you count the house elf, she'll get in trouble too, I 'spect. Poor Nelli
"D'you want to meet a giant?" Who wouldn't want to meet one as nice a Hagrid?
Oh, that was wonderful with Hagrid and Fang! You do great with showing emotion. Snape was spot on, I think, after the nightmare and swearing never to drink and crying. I could picture it, even if that's an emotion not used for our older hero.
Reading your note made me realize that I've only commented once on this story and I wanted to remedy that as such. I am greatly enjoying this story. I love the punishments being doled out, very fitting, and your Harry is very believable. I also like your Draco and I hope to consider so in the future. Maybe nice Harry will rub off on Draco. Oh, but I hope that doesn't get Draco beat...
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