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Title: After the Selection of Champions 12 Jul 2022 4:11 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Just found this an excellent start
Title: After the Selection of Champions 02 Dec 2007 1:29 am
Reviewer: Marie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great start! I can't wait to see what happens!!
Title: After the Selection of Champions 15 Aug 2007 9:20 am
Reviewer: Kate_360 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It was nice although I didn't get Dumbledore's umm...request. But that's okay.
Title: After the Selection of Champions 26 Jul 2007 2:07 am
Reviewer: JM (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A great start! I loved the potion for fainting. (:
Title: After the Selection of Champions 19 Jul 2007 4:42 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    It works a lot better! :) yup!

    I added this fic to the challenge for you.

    Are we going to get an update before the book comes out? Don't forget us now! :)
Title: After the Selection of Champions 19 Jul 2007 6:41 am
Reviewer: Irene (Anonymous) [Report This]
    awesome start! i always love the irate Snape that sits around and glares at the world and oh-so occasionally lifts up a finger to help!

    you know, i just read that statement over again...no wonder my friends get all frightened when i start going on about snape.

    but seriously, so far, everyone seems pretty in character! i can't wait for more...hint hint...XD

    Author's Response:

    Snape is by far my favorite character... everyone seems to hate him!  But I just love his sarcasm and snarky attitude!  Thanks for reviewing!

Title: After the Selection of Champions 19 Jul 2007 6:08 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start so far. It's hard to find stories written about JKR's fourth book and hopefully this will turn out good. Please write more soon!
Title: After the Selection of Champions 19 Jul 2007 5:55 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Intresting twist on what happened in GoF. Looking forward to reading the rest. Great start, update soon. LES
Title: After the Selection of Champions 19 Jul 2007 5:19 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice! I really liked how different your Harry was. I like him a little more nerdy (the descriptions) and a little younger. It feels different. You might get some OOC comments, but i liked it.

    I also liked how Harry panicked about people dying in this tournament and and Dumbledore said "Severus!" sharply and then Harry's chair was turned and he was helped with a potion. That was very dramatic feeling.

    This line was a little strange: "Please have a seat, Severus." Dumbledore said, gesturing towards the second chair beside Harry. "I so hate being smaller than my company." It seemed a little out of character for Dumbledore. Maybe mentioning that he was joking would help? I don't know.

    Well I liked this chapter and I'm interested in reading more. :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much!  I love Harry when he seems a bit innoncent and unaware of the more devious plot surrounding him :)  He's so much fun to write!  I completely changed the context of the line you were talking about... if you could check it for me, that would be great!  I also edited some of the commas and such.  Thank you for the review!


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