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Reviews For The Triwizard Keeper
I added this fic to the challenge for you. Are we going to get an update before the book comes out? Don't forget us now! :)
you know, i just read that statement over again...no wonder my friends get all frightened when i start going on about snape. but seriously, so far, everyone seems pretty in character! i can't wait for more...hint hint...XD Author's Response: Snape is by far my favorite character... everyone seems to hate him! But I just love his sarcasm and snarky attitude! Thanks for reviewing!
I also liked how Harry panicked about people dying in this tournament and and Dumbledore said "Severus!" sharply and then Harry's chair was turned and he was helped with a potion. That was very dramatic feeling. This line was a little strange: "Please have a seat, Severus." Dumbledore said, gesturing towards the second chair beside Harry. "I so hate being smaller than my company." It seemed a little out of character for Dumbledore. Maybe mentioning that he was joking would help? I don't know. Well I liked this chapter and I'm interested in reading more. :) Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love Harry when he seems a bit innoncent and unaware of the more devious plot surrounding him :) He's so much fun to write! I completely changed the context of the line you were talking about... if you could check it for me, that would be great! I also edited some of the commas and such. Thank you for the review! |
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