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Reviews For Word Up
With hope from one of your fans Best regards, Agneta Stockholm, Sweden Author's Response: Hi`Agneta! Sorry!``It's`not`so`much`writer's`block`as`it`is`real`life;`and`even`though`I`know`exactly`what`is`happening`in`this`chapter,`writing`it`is...well,`I`don't`like`how`it`keeps`coming`out. But`DON'T`WORRY!``Not`giving`this`up.``And`thank`you`sooooooo`much`for`those`awesome`compliments.``Hearing`from`you`all`reminds`me`to`get`my`nose`to`the`grind`stone`and`get`this`out.``I`won't`say`how`long`it`will`be,`but`I`hope`not`long.``Thank`you`so`much ANdy
Author's Response: I’m glad you found my story. Enjoy!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Super spy...I hope it's not over the top. I give him alot of credit for having survived thus far being at odds with both sides. And after so many years of being a spy and/or planning and preparing for Voldemort's return, I imagine he'd have that position pretty well defined. I don't know if you've ever done tutoring, but I've learned from tutoring chemistry that you learn alot more about a subject when you try to teach it. I imagined that the whole time he was writing his defense book, he was analysing his own actions, words, etc...in various past situations and through that became even better. Wow, I just wrote a book as a response! I'm glad Snape is interesting. I'm hoping in time I can make Harry just as interesting, because JKR did. And I really appreciate your review. Thanks again. Enjoy!
Now, a couple of things I noticed: "Albus Dumbledore was a man that" Things THAT, People WHO. It should be "Dumbledore was a man who." "a man that did wear his heart" Same as above. Should be who, not that. dark lord Should be always capitalized. It's his title and stands in for his name. auror Also should be capitalized... not for any really good reason, but because Rowling capitalizes it. DeathEater Always two words, not one. Author's Response: Thank you! I mean that. I'll get those changes in sometime today or tonight. I really appreciate that you let me know the mistake and why it should be fixed. You're a good teacher. I can't say enough about how happy I am you like my Snape. I hope I can keep him up to those standards. I am definitely in the 'Snape is one scary guy' camp. Thanks and enjoy.
I extremely liked Snape's threatening of Mundungus: "You fool, how dare you put MY life at risk by your amazing lack of restraint" It had me laughing. Perfect dialog's for Snape.You have no idea how much i liked him here:). In short your dialogs were very flowing and good..Thumbs up for now Author's Response: Thanks! Your review really made me feel good. I laughed through some of that too. Hope you enjoy the rest!
Author's Response: Yeah, he is scary. I'm glad that came through in the story. I don't want anybody to forget who we're dealing with here.
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