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Title: Chapter 1: Warnings 02 May 2008 2:14 am
Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting start! I like that you ended this chapter on a comedic note!
Title: Chapter 1: Warnings 06 Dec 2007 9:42 pm
Reviewer: Agneta (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You have not updated or (even more worrying) answered a review since Nov. 15. It is now Dec. 6 and this wonderful story seems to be fading into the mist of the "Never-ended". And I would hate that!!! I love your writing, your characterization, your story line, a.s.o. You are very gifted and (yeeehaaa!) has validated my views re. Hogwarts as a wasteland of missed opportunities re. the training of those doomed to fight (and that makes me angry!) Your story addresses these issues and that makes me happy. And (I think I said so before - but it may be repeated - I LOVE YOUR STRONG WARRIOR SEVERUS!!!) So, there, enough shouting -but seriously, please update. Writer's block is irritating but can be overcome. Can I help? Anything to keep this going.
    With hope from one of your fans
    Best regards,
    Agneta
    Stockholm, Sweden

    Author's Response:

    Hi`Agneta! 

    Sorry!``It's`not`so`much`writer's`block`as`it`is`real`life;`and`even`though`I`know`exactly`what`is`happening`in`this`chapter,`writing`it`is...well,`I`don't`like`how`it`keeps`coming`out.

    But`DON'T`WORRY!``Not`giving`this`up.``And`thank`you`sooooooo`much`for`those`awesome`compliments.``Hearing`from`you`all`reminds`me`to`get`my`nose`to`the`grind`stone`and`get`this`out.``I`won't`say`how`long`it`will`be,`but`I`hope`not`long.``Thank`you`so`much

    ANdy

Title: Chapter 1: Warnings 13 Sep 2007 11:18 pm
Reviewer: Syllva (Signed) [Report This]
    An awesome chapter, though I have only just begun reading this.

    Author's Response: I’m glad you found my story.  Enjoy!
Title: Chapter 1: Warnings 18 Aug 2007 10:24 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    You have created an interesting Snape in this chapter. I think I will enjoy following the adventures of your SuperSpy!Snape. He definitely names names and takes no prisoners.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review!

    Super spy...I hope it's not over the top.  I give him alot of credit for having survived thus far being at odds with both sides.  And after so many years of being a spy and/or planning and preparing for Voldemort's return, I imagine he'd have that position pretty well defined.  I don't know if you've ever done tutoring, but I've learned from tutoring chemistry that you learn alot more about a subject when you try to teach it.  I imagined that the whole time he was writing his defense book, he was analysing his own actions, words, etc...in various past situations and through that became even better. 

    Wow, I just wrote a book as a response!  I'm glad Snape is interesting.  I'm hoping in time I can make Harry just as interesting, because JKR did.  And I really appreciate your review.  Thanks again.

    Enjoy!

Title: Chapter 1: Warnings 30 Jul 2007 2:21 pm
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    This is an awesome start. I LOVE this Snape. He's just canon enough to be believable, but much more edgy. I can totally see it. Plus I really like how you've set up his place in the Order.

    Now, a couple of things I noticed:

    "Albus Dumbledore was a man that"
    Things THAT, People WHO. It should be "Dumbledore was a man who."

    "a man that did wear his heart"
    Same as above. Should be who, not that.

    dark lord
    Should be always capitalized. It's his title and stands in for his name.

    auror
    Also should be capitalized... not for any really good reason, but because Rowling capitalizes it.

    DeathEater
    Always two words, not one.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I mean that.  I'll get those changes in sometime today or tonight.  I really appreciate that you let me know the mistake and why it should be fixed.  You're a good teacher.

    I can't say enough about how happy I am you like my Snape.  I hope I can keep him up to those standards.  I am definitely in the 'Snape is one scary guy' camp.

     Thanks and enjoy.

Title: Chapter 1: Warnings 29 Jul 2007 5:06 pm
Reviewer: Katie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You had me ..rather impressed. The description of all the meeting and Snape. It was very good and I mean it. You actually showed the power of Snape and his talk in the highest term. I have just completed the 1st chapter and am extremely excited to see what happen next. Keep up the good work. It is without doubt the most interesting Order meeting i have ever read :).

    I extremely liked Snape's threatening of Mundungus:

    "You fool, how dare you put MY life at risk by your amazing lack of restraint"

    It had me laughing. Perfect dialog's for Snape.You have no idea how much i liked him here:). In short your dialogs were very flowing and good..Thumbs up for now

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Your review really made me feel good.  I laughed through some of that too.  Hope you enjoy the rest!
Title: Chapter 1: Warnings 28 Jul 2007 11:37 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape's a bit like the Lone Ranger, isn't he? Quite a scary guy, actually. Good start to your story. Now I'm off to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Yeah, he is scary.  I'm glad that came through in the story.  I don't want anybody to forget who we're dealing with here.
Title: Chapter 1: Warnings 20 Jul 2007 4:28 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice start. Moody never used an unforgivable curse? That's kind of shocking. I loved the ending with Snape cursing the portrait. :)

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